19．假定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫的以下作文．文中
共有 10 處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處．每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改． 增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞．刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉． 修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下畫一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞．
注意：1．每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞．
2．只允許修改 10 處，多者（從第 11 處起）不計(jì)分．
In order to promote participation in outdoor exercise，our school had organized an activity to climb the West Mountain on April 10．The moment we arrived at the foot of a mountain，we set out for the top in high spirit．We supported each other to pass the rocky areas on the course of the climb．Laughing and cheering，we eventually reached the summit，there we were greeted by the bright sunshine and fresh air．Viewing from the top，the city was extreme beautiful．This event was very beneficial，for not only we take a break from our heavy school workload，but we also learned what to cooperate．Therefore，we strongly suggest that similar events are held every year!

分析 文章講述了一次登山活動(dòng)．為了讓我們多參與戶外活動(dòng)，學(xué)校組織了登西山的活動(dòng)．我們興高采烈地朝山頂出發(fā)，一路歡聲笑語(yǔ)，登上山頂我們看到了明媚的陽(yáng)光，呼吸到新鮮的空氣．從山頂上看，我們的城市真漂亮．希望每年都有這樣的活動(dòng)．

解答 In order to promote participation in outdoor exercise，our school had organized an activity to climb the West Mountain on April 10．The moment we arrived at the foot of a mountain，we set out for the top in high spirit．We supported each other to pass the rocky areas on the course of the climb．Laughing and cheering，we eventually reached the summit，there we were greeted by the bright sunshine and fresh air．Viewing from the top，the city was extreme beautiful．This event was very beneficial，for not only∧we take a break from our heavy school workload，but we also learned what to cooperate．Therefore，we strongly suggest that similar events are held every year!
詳解：
1．had去掉；時(shí)態(tài)錯(cuò)誤．句意表達(dá)的是過(guò)去的事實(shí)，不能用過(guò)去完成時(shí)態(tài)．
2．a(chǎn)n改為the；冠詞錯(cuò)誤．句意表達(dá)的是特指，要用定冠詞．
3．spirit改為spirits；短語(yǔ)搭配錯(cuò)誤．in high spirits興高采烈．
4．on改為in/during；介詞錯(cuò)誤．句意表達(dá)的是在爬山的過(guò)程中．
5．there改為where；連詞錯(cuò)誤．句中we were greeted by the bright sunshine and fresh air修飾名詞summit，是一個(gè)非限制性定語(yǔ)從句；從句結(jié)構(gòu)完整，且先行詞summit表示地點(diǎn)，要用where來(lái)連接．
6．Viewing改為Viewed；分詞錯(cuò)誤．句中view與主語(yǔ)the city構(gòu)成動(dòng)賓關(guān)系，要用表示被動(dòng)的過(guò)去分詞作方式狀語(yǔ)．
7．extreme改為extremely；副詞錯(cuò)誤．句中extreme修飾形容詞beautiful，要用副詞形式．
8．加did；句型結(jié)構(gòu)錯(cuò)誤．句中not only位于句首，句子要部分倒裝；句意表達(dá)的是過(guò)去發(fā)生的動(dòng)作，要添加助動(dòng)詞did來(lái)體現(xiàn)時(shí)態(tài)．
9．what改為how；特殊疑問(wèn)詞錯(cuò)誤．句中特殊疑問(wèn)詞后接不定式，構(gòu)成復(fù)合不定式短語(yǔ)；句意表達(dá)的是方式，要用how來(lái)構(gòu)成．
10．a(chǎn)re改為be；句子結(jié)構(gòu)錯(cuò)誤．句中suggest后接賓語(yǔ)從句，從句要用should加動(dòng)詞原形，should可以省略．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 短文改錯(cuò)題考查的是語(yǔ)境理解能力和用法基礎(chǔ)知識(shí)．�？嫉闹R(shí)點(diǎn)有：名詞（單復(fù)數(shù)錯(cuò)誤），動(dòng)詞（時(shí)態(tài)，語(yǔ)態(tài)，搭配，轉(zhuǎn)換），代詞（指代錯(cuò)誤），形容詞和副詞（轉(zhuǎn)換，比較等級(jí)），連詞（and，but，or）等．偶爾也會(huì)考查邏輯錯(cuò)誤，如本來(lái)用her，卻用了his等等．解題是要注意：以句子為單位，以動(dòng)詞為中心．看句子要看完整，避免句子前后矛盾的錯(cuò)誤；找錯(cuò)誤要以動(dòng)詞為主，動(dòng)詞或與動(dòng)詞有關(guān)的錯(cuò)誤占了改錯(cuò)的題的重要一部分．

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