Question

【題目】假如你是張可，你的好友王羽因不擅長與他人交流，感到非�？鄲馈Ｗ罱�，他來

信向你求助。請你用英語給他寫一封100詞左右的回信。主要內容包括：

1．勸他不必為此事感到苦惱；

2．告訴他與別人有效地交流是很重要的；

3．就如何改變目前的狀況給他提出幾點建議。

（1）直接、真誠的與人交流 （2）清楚的表達自己的想法 （3） 學會傾聽

注意：新的開頭和結尾已經給出，但不計入總詞數(shù)。

Dear Wang Yu,

I know you are feeling annoyed these days because you are not able to communicate with others effectively.

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I hope my advice will be of help to you.

All the best.

Yours,

Zhang Ke

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Wang Yu,

I know you are feeling annoyed these days because you are not able to communicate with others effectively. As the saying goes, “Every man has his faults”. I notice some people around us are also not good at communication, so you don’t have to worry too much about it. Of course, good communication is important for us to create a pleasant relationship with others, which can increase our chance of success. That is why I would like to offer you some advice on how to develop effective communication skills.

Firstly, be direct and honest to those you talk to so that they can understand you easily. Secondly, be aware of what you want to say and express yourself clearly. Thirdly, learn to understand others when they talk so that you can exchange ideas with them.

I hope my advice will be of help to you.

All the best.

Yours,

Zhang Ke

【解析】 這是一篇提綱類的作文，好友王羽因不擅長與他人交流，感到非�？鄲馈＝�，他來信向你求助。對此回信，ａ．勸他不必為此事感到苦惱；

ｂ．告訴他與別人有效地交流是很重要的；ｃ．就如何改變目前的狀況給他提出幾點建議。（1）直接、真誠的與人交流 （2）清楚的表達自己的想法 （3） 學會傾聽；已經為考生列出了所有需要寫作的要點，因而考生在寫作這篇文章是一定要將題目中的所有內容都囊括進去�？忌�需要注意以下幾點：

這是一篇記敘類文章要注意文章表達時所用的時態(tài) 不要一種時態(tài)用到底。

考生在進行寫作的時候要注意句子語法的正確性，以及熟語 短語 以及詞匯運用的正確性。

文章一定要次序分明，將題目中的要點全都囊括進去，各部分銜接緊密。

【范文亮點】

文章開門見山亮明自己的觀點，指出問題的所在，并且在其后的作文中使用了“every man has his faults”這一俗語。同時文章中也熟練運用限制性定語從句以及非限制性定語從句。

文章層次分明使用了firstly secondly 以及thirdly對文章進行有序的分層，使文章井然有序，同時也試用了像be ware of . be honest to . be able to 這樣的搭配提升了文章的層次。