Question

1．注意：1．每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分
During the travel back to my hometown，in the plane，I sat next to an old lady who looked very scary．She closed her eyes tight and grasped her red bag on her lap．I thought I might be nervous，so I planned to chat with her to make her to feel relaxed．We talk a lot about our families and experiences．When the flight over，I also helped her carry her luggages．She was so grateful about my help that she gave me the big hug when we were going to leave．On our way out，we waved good-bye．She kept on turning back to see me unless we couldn't see each other any long．

Answer 1

分析 作者在本文中講述了在飛機上遇到一位緊張的老太太并幫她放松心情，緩解緊張情緒的事情，飛行結束后幫老太太拿行李，老太太對作者非常感激．

解答 During the travel back to my hometown，in the plane，I sat next to an old lady who looked very scary．She closed her eyes tight and grasped her red bag on her lap．I thought I might be nervous，so I planned to chat with her to make her to feel relaxed．We talk a lot about our families and experiences．When the flight∧over，I also helped her carry her luggages．She was so grateful about my help that she gave me the big hug when we were going to leave．On our way out，we waved good-bye．She kept on turning back to see me unless we couldn't see each other any long．
詳解：
1．scary改為scared；考查形容詞，scary可怕的，sacred感到害怕的．根據(jù)下文的She closed her eyes tight and grasped her red bag on her lap應該是老太太感到害怕，故scary改為scared． 
2． I改為she；考查代詞．我認為她（老太太）緊張，…"．文中的代詞指代老太太，故將I改為she． 
3．去掉to；考查非謂語動詞，make sb．do sth．讓人做某事，不定式作make的賓語補足語，省去to． 
4．talk改為talked；考查動詞的時態(tài)，根據(jù)語境應是動作發(fā)生在過去，故應將talk改為talked． 
5．over前加was；考查系動詞．題干中when引導的時間狀語從句中缺少系動詞，be over意為"結束"應用過去時，． 
6．luggages改為luggage；考查名詞，luggage行李，是不可數(shù)名詞，沒有復數(shù)形式，故將luggages改為luggage． 
7． about改為for；考查介詞．be grateful for是固定短語，意為"因…而感激"．故將about改為for． 
8．the改為a；考查冠詞，give sb a big hug給某人一個大大的擁抱． 
9．unless改為until；考查連詞，unless除非，until直到．"她不停地回頭看我直到我們再也看不到對方"，根據(jù)句意改為until． 
10．long改為longer；考查固定短語． not…any longer是固定搭配，意為"不再"．

點評 短文改錯題首先要整體理解短文意思，抓住中心思想，結合語境和上下文關系，充分運用平時掌握的固定搭配，習慣用法，句型結構等等來發(fā)現(xiàn)文章的錯誤之處，加以修正．