Question

南陽一中將于2013年10月28日舉行建校110周年校慶活動。假設你是校學生會主席李華，現(xiàn)將代表全體學生邀請學校優(yōu)秀畢業(yè)生陳明（現(xiàn)于清華大學學習）回校參加校慶典禮活動。請 根據(jù)以下要點寫一封e-mail 向陳明發(fā)出邀請。
要點： 1. 10月28日上午9點，舉行“慶祝南陽一中建校110年周年慶典”，地點南陽一中操場。2.下午3點在報告廳給學生做報告，內容關于介紹大學生活及給予他們學習生活方面的建議。3. 10月23日前回復是否可以前來。
注意：1. 詞數(shù)120個左右。  2. 信的開頭已為你寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)。
提示詞：110周年慶典：the 110^th anniversary celebration
Dear Chen Ming,
How is everything with you? ___________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua

Answer 1

Dear Chen Ming,
How is everything with you? Our school is going to hold her 110th anniversary celebration on October 28,2013.I’m Li Hua, chairman of the Student Union.Now on behalf of all students, I’m writing to invite you to come back to attend the ceremony.
Now let me introduce the related activities for you. The ceremony are all the teachers and students together with some outstanding graduates at home and abroad.  What’s more, I wonder if it is convenient for you to deliver a lecture hall at 3:00 pm.It would be better if you could introduce the college life and offer some advice on our life and study. We’d be very grateful if you could let me know whether to participate by October 23.
We would be looking forward to your coming with great pleasure. Your early reply will be highly appreciated.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua

試題分析：本文是一封邀請信。要求代表全體學生邀請學校優(yōu)秀畢業(yè)生陳明（現(xiàn)于清華大學學習）回校參加校慶典禮活動。請 根據(jù)以下要點寫一封e-mail 向陳明發(fā)出邀請。文章具有很強的可寫性，內容貼近考生的實際情況，考生有話可說，有話可寫。文章的要點也基本上都給出來了，但只是一個提綱，考生還需要做適當?shù)陌l(fā)揮。在寫作的過程中要注意使用合適的連接詞，同時也要注意使用一些高級的句型如強調句，倒裝句等，讓文章更上檔次。本更有文采。同時在列舉措施的時候要使用合適的連接詞如：for one thing，What’s more等，讓文章看起來很有條理，也很流暢。本篇文章在寫作時不要啰嗦，力求簡潔的表達自己的觀點。
【亮點說明】Now on behalf of all students, I’m writing to invite you to come back to attend the ceremony.這句話用了on behalf of代表， Now let me introduce the related activities for you. 這句話用了過去分詞做定語， I wonder if it is convenient for you to deliver a lecture hall at 3:00 pm.這句話用了賓語從句和it做形式主語， We’d be very grateful if you could let me know whether to participate by October 23.這句話用了疑問詞+to do做賓語，還有文章還用了What’s more,這樣的詞使文章更加連貫。