新年即將來(lái)臨，你打算用攢下的零花錢給父母買一件禮物。請(qǐng)以 “A present for my parents”為題寫一篇文章。該文必須包括以下內(nèi)容：

1.你送的禮物：一張健康俱樂部的貴賓卡；

2.你父母親的現(xiàn)狀：父親是教師，工作很辛苦；母親喜歡讀書，但缺乏運(yùn)動(dòng)；

3.你送該禮物的原因；

4. 該禮物對(duì)他們可能產(chǎn)生的影響和帶來(lái)的變化。

注意：1. 文章應(yīng)包括以上所有信息；

2. 詞數(shù)；100左右。文章的開頭已經(jīng)寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

A Present for My Parents

The new year is coming and I want to give my parents a present. ________________________________________________________________________

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A present for my parents

The new year is coming and I want to give my parents a present. That is a VIP card of a health club. My father works hard as a teacher, spending most of his time working with great efforts at school. My mother loves reading and often dives into piles of books. But she seldom does exercise.

As I grow up, they are getting older. Both of them should exercise more but neither is doing enough. With the health club membership, I hope that they will find time to do more exercise.

I want to express my love and thanks to them by giving them the present. I think they will relax in the health club and make more friends. At the same time, I hope they will enjoy better health.

【解析】

試題分析：題目要求以“A present for my parents”為題寫一篇英語(yǔ)短文，作文的主要內(nèi)容是用零花錢給父母買禮物。寫作要點(diǎn)包括：禮物是一張貴賓卡；父母的現(xiàn)狀；送貴賓卡的原因；禮物將給父母帶來(lái)的影響等方面。詞數(shù)在100詞左右，注意開頭不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；不要出現(xiàn)標(biāo)點(diǎn)和拼寫錯(cuò)誤，盡量保持卷面整潔、字體美觀；注意行文的連貫性。

亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明：

范文涵蓋了所有的寫作要點(diǎn)，也進(jìn)行了適當(dāng)?shù)耐卣�，并注意語(yǔ)句的連貫性；范文還使用了賓語(yǔ)從句、非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞等語(yǔ)法知識(shí)，具備較強(qiáng)的語(yǔ)言運(yùn)用能力。

語(yǔ)法方面：非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞spending most of his time working with great efforts at school；賓語(yǔ)從句①that they will find time to do more exercise，②they will relax in the health club and make more friends，③they will enjoy better health等，語(yǔ)法知識(shí)運(yùn)用嫻熟，顯示了較強(qiáng)的語(yǔ)法功底，也使作文句式變得多樣；

篇章結(jié)構(gòu)方面：范文注意使用but, as I grow up, With the health club membership, at the same time等詞和短語(yǔ)來(lái)銜接句子和段落，使表達(dá)變得更有條理；

短語(yǔ)和搭配方面：范文使用了dive into, piles of, do exercise, both of, grow up等短語(yǔ)，使作文的內(nèi)容變得充實(shí)。

考點(diǎn)：命題類材料作文

 

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