Question

【題目】請(qǐng)結(jié)合材料，按要求用英文寫(xiě)作，詞數(shù)不少于60。

Some parents tend to look into their children’s school bags, diaries and even their chat records, which is very common in their daily life.

要求：

(1) 就此材料發(fā)表你的看法；

(2) 緊扣材料，有明確的觀(guān)點(diǎn)；

(3) 詞數(shù)不少于60;

(4) 在答題卡上作答。

Answer 1

【答案】

As we know, some parents often look into their children’s school bags, diaries and even chat-on-line records. I fully understand what they are concerned about. They are actually worried about that the kids may get into some trouble. On the other hand, the parents have probably learned some horrible stories about other teenagers from their personal records.

However, I don’t think it is a proper way to do so because the kids not only need respect but also are expected to be respected. A good relation is based on respecting and trusting each other.

【解析】

試題分析：考查半開(kāi)放性作文。本文要求結(jié)合材料，按要求用英文寫(xiě)作，內(nèi)容是以英語(yǔ)短文出現(xiàn)，要求考生讀懂材料，看懂材料的主旨是一些年輕人對(duì)父母的不尊重，要求（1）就此材料發(fā)表你的感想;（2）應(yīng)緊扣材料，有明確的觀(guān)點(diǎn);在保證內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)全部概括的基礎(chǔ)上可以充分發(fā)揮自己的想象，進(jìn)而用自己的語(yǔ)言來(lái)表達(dá)某種觀(guān)點(diǎn)或看法，增添了寫(xiě)作的靈活性，同時(shí)能較好地考查考生的想象能力和英語(yǔ)語(yǔ)言表達(dá)能力。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】半開(kāi)放性作文給出了一個(gè)話(huà)題，并有部分的英語(yǔ)提示。給考生自由發(fā)揮的余地較大。對(duì)于考生的綜合能力要求較高，要求考生有很強(qiáng)的謀篇布局的能力和組織要點(diǎn)的能力。在完成開(kāi)放性作文時(shí)，首先要選擇自己熟悉的短語(yǔ)，如 look into，concerned about，get into some trouble，is based on，在你的能力范圍之內(nèi)，選擇句式時(shí)要賦予變化，如I don’t think it is a proper way to do so because the kids not only need respect but also are expected to be respected. ，運(yùn)用了not only...but also的句型，因?yàn)檫@樣你才可以更好的駕馭。同時(shí)也要選擇合適的連接詞，如On the other hand，However，把各個(gè)要點(diǎn)組織成一個(gè)完整的整體，在發(fā)表個(gè)人觀(guān)點(diǎn)的時(shí)候，可以使用諺語(yǔ)來(lái)提升整個(gè)文章的檔次和文采，也能增加得高分的可能性。