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9．生活中沖突時(shí)有發(fā)生．你班同學(xué)蘇華和李江在上周籃球賽打籃球時(shí)發(fā)生爭執(zhí)，導(dǎo)致關(guān)系緊張．請你結(jié)合此事，并根據(jù)以下提示，用英語寫一篇短文，向?qū)W校英文報(bào)"Happy Teens"專欄投稿．

簡要描述事情的經(jīng)過	打籃球、碰撞（bump into each other）、爭執(zhí)，等等
分析發(fā)生沖突的原因	1．遇事不夠冷靜
	2．…太注重得失…
談?wù)劚苊鉀_突的做法	（請考生根據(jù)自己的經(jīng)歷或感想，提出至少兩種做法）

注意：
1．對所有要點(diǎn)逐一陳述，適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，不要簡單翻譯．
2．詞數(shù)100左右．開頭已經(jīng)寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
3．作文中不得提及有關(guān)考生個(gè)人身份的任何信息，如班級、人名等．
Conflicts with others are common in everyday life．
                                                             

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇表格類的看圖作文，要求以沖突為話題，描述給定情境，分析現(xiàn)象并提出建議．話題貼近時(shí)代，貼近生活，貼近學(xué)生，提示內(nèi)容少，發(fā)揮空間大，考生有話可寫，體現(xiàn)了新課標(biāo)背景下的命題方向．范文思路清晰，結(jié)構(gòu)合理，內(nèi)容涵蓋了表格內(nèi)的所有要點(diǎn)，有適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，主題得到了升華．
亮點(diǎn)句型一：To avoid such conflicts，we should be kind to one another，which is essential to enjoying a harmonious life．為了避免這種沖突，我們應(yīng)該善待對方，這是必不可少的享受和諧生活．本句中動(dòng)詞不定式 To avoid such conflicts在句中做目的狀語；which is essential to enjoying a harmonious life是一個(gè)非限制性定語從句．
亮點(diǎn)句型二：It is also a virtue to forgive and forget，especially in such a competitive and stressful society．寬恕和遺忘也是一種美德，特別是在這樣一個(gè)充滿競爭和壓力的社會里．本句中it是形式主語，真正的主語是動(dòng)詞不定式to forgive and forget．

解答 Conflicts with others are common in everyday life．During the basketball game yesterday afternoon，Su Hua and Li Jiang bumped into each other，trying to catch the ball．Then they started shouting and yelling，and it turned into a horrible quarrel．
    To be honest，it was Su's fault but Li was also to blame-they were not calm enough and both said some really mean things．They cared too much about winning and losing．As a matter of fact，blocking，pushing and bumping are just part of a tough game．
    To avoid such conflicts，we should be kind to one another，which is essential to enjoying a harmonious life．（亮點(diǎn)句型一）It is also a virtue to forgive and forget，especially in such a competitive and stressful society．（亮點(diǎn)句型二）Instead of blaming each other，we should communicate more and put ourselves in others'place．
Don't be self-centered and try to be considerate．We must learn to handle conflicts calmly and wisely．

點(diǎn)評 英語寫作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運(yùn)用語言的能力．在撰寫時(shí)要注意主謂語一致，時(shí)態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實(shí)的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．