Question

假設(shè)你叫李華，現(xiàn)在是重點(diǎn)高中第一中學(xué)的一名新生。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提示，給你初中的英語(yǔ)老師王老師寫一封信，表達(dá)對(duì)他的感謝和尊敬。
詞數(shù)120左右；文章的開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
Dear Mr. Wang,
How is everything going?
I’m very excited to write to express my thanks to you. I am now studying in  No. 1 Senior School, which I have been dreaming of.  _____________________________________________
Yours sincerely
Li Hua

Answer 1

Dear Mr Wang,
How is everything going?
I’m very excited to write to express my thanks to you. I am now studying in No. 1 Senior School, which I have been dreaming of. Recently I am always remembering the days when you were with us. Your classes are lively and interesting. My English has improved greatly because of your creative work。
At one time, however, the pressure of examinations, too much homework and the high expectations from the parents made me depressed. I was tired of the warning that if I didn’t do my best, I wouldn’t have the chance to go to the key school. Thank you for your encouragement and patience; if not, I wouldn’t have realized my dream. And now I really appreciate your help. I hope more and more of your students will go to their ideal schools.
Miss you! I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours sincerely
Li Hua

試題分析：考生首先要認(rèn)真閱讀前面的提示認(rèn)真審題，確定文章的中心。注意文章文體、人稱和時(shí)態(tài)。本文主要應(yīng)用虛擬語(yǔ)氣，所以在寫作時(shí)，要尤其注意虛擬語(yǔ)氣的表達(dá)方式。根據(jù)情景的發(fā)展，按順序安排好材料。同時(shí)應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過(guò)渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性。溫馨提醒：考生必須認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫情況，有無(wú)拼寫錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】范文中運(yùn)用一些的常見(jiàn)的短語(yǔ)because of因?yàn)椋?At one time,曾經(jīng)；too much太多（修飾不可數(shù)名詞）； was tired of 厭倦；have the chance to有機(jī)會(huì)做某事； realized my dream實(shí)現(xiàn)某人的夢(mèng)想。I am now studying in No. 1 Senior School, which I have been dreaming of.這個(gè)句子中用which來(lái)引導(dǎo)非限制性定語(yǔ)從句。I was tired of the warning that if I didn’t do my best, I wouldn’t have the chance to go to the key school這個(gè)句子中that引導(dǎo)warning的同位語(yǔ)從句，同位語(yǔ)從句含有if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語(yǔ)從句。