Question

【題目】最近，家庭生養(yǎng)二胎已成社會熱門話題。很多孩子都強烈反對自己的父母生養(yǎng)二胎。某英文報小編想聽聽你就此現(xiàn)象的看法。假設你是李華，請給報社小編寫一封信，簡要說明當今孩子反對自家生養(yǎng)二胎的可能原因及你對此事的看法。

注意：

1．詞數(shù)100左右；

2．信的開頭已為你寫好。

Dear Editor,

I’m writing with regard to the topic in your newspaper that some children are strongly against their parents’ having another child.

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Editor,

I’m writing with regard to the topic in your newspaper that some children are strongly against their parents’ having another child.

From my perspective, the reason why some children react to it so violently is probably that they, already accustomed to owing the whole love of their parents, are worried that their parents will spend all their time and energy on the little baby while ignoring them. However, what they don’t realize is that having another child is of great significance to a family, because it is children that make a family harmonious. What’s more, with a brother or a sister keeping them company, they won’t feel lonely and will learn to value the sense of sharing and being considerate.

Therefore, I think they should accept another child in their family and their life will be better.

Sincerely yours,

Li Hua

【解析】本文是寫一篇給定主題的書面表達，寫作話題為當今孩子反對自家生養(yǎng)二胎的可能原因。

1.在寫作時應注意要符合主題，通篇以一般現(xiàn)在時為主；

2.要點要齊全，并且使用適當?shù)倪B接詞如文中的From my perspective、However、What’s more、Therefore等，使上下文行文流暢；

3.行文思路要有邏輯性，條例清晰。因為所有的考生的大致內(nèi)容都是一樣的，所以難點就是寫出讓人眼前一亮的作文。學生可以采用簡單句與復雜句結合的方法如文中的 the reason why some children react to it so violently is probably that they, already accustomed to owing the whole love of their parents, are worried that their parents will spend all their time and energy on the little baby while ignoring them就是一個采用了非謂語動詞和定語從句和簡單句結合的句子；

4.同時盡量避免多次使用相同的單詞與詞組，盡量使用一些高級詞匯與詞組如文中l(wèi)onely、be accustomed to、significance、violently 等使內(nèi)容更加的充實。

【范文亮點】

文章開頭以 the reason why引出話題，言簡意賅，主旨鮮明。文章用From my perspective，What’s more,However這些連接詞，層層遞進，條理清晰，講出了對于作文主題的建議。最后用Therefore總結，首尾呼應，文章結構緊湊。文章還用了be accustomed to,spend on,be worried that等高級短語讓文章看起來更有料。