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【題目】假如你是學(xué)生會主席李華，你校學(xué)生會將于12月12日下午4點在學(xué)校報告廳舉辦高一、高二年級英語短劇大賽。請你根據(jù)以下信息，用英語寫一篇書面通知。內(nèi)容如下：

活動目的：激發(fā)學(xué)生學(xué)習(xí)興趣，豐富課外生活。

參賽要求：每班學(xué)生自編自導(dǎo)一個英文短劇。

報名時間及地點：12月8日之前高一、高二年級英語老師辦公室。

評講：年級前六名獲獎。

注意：1. 字?jǐn)?shù)100字左右。

2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

3. 參考詞匯：報名：sign up

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Answer 1

【答案】

In order to motivate students to learn English and enrich their after-class lives, an English short play Competition will be held in the lecture hall at 4:00 p.m., December 12th. Each class of Senior 1 and Senior 2 is required to perform one short play which will be created and directed by the students themselves. Those who would like to take part in the competition are supposed to sign up in English Teachers’ offices of Senior 1 and Senior 2 before December 8 th.

All the students in Senior 1 and Senior 2 are welcome to join in this activity. The top six winners of each grade will be given prizes.

Looking forward to your active participation.

December 3 rd Students’ Union

【解析】

試題分析：題目要求根據(jù)所給要點寫一篇通知，通告英語短劇大賽的有關(guān)事項。寫作要點包括活動目的，參賽要求，報名時間地點，以及講評4個方面。注意：字?jǐn)?shù)100字左右。 可以適當(dāng)增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。參考詞匯：報名：sign up

亮點說明：范文使用了一些重要的語法知識：非謂語動詞In order to motivate students to learn English and enrich their after-class lives；定語從句one short play which will be created and directed by the students themselves.等，語法知識使用得當(dāng)，敘事清晰；

范文注意使用了、一般現(xiàn)在時、一般將來時等不同的時態(tài)來敘述，對時態(tài)有較好的把握；

范文使用了很多固定短語： in order to ,be required to ,be supposed to 等高級詞匯使作文內(nèi)容更加充實；更有條理，做到了行文連貫。