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19．假設你是李華，正在英國倫敦參加夏令營．請給在該市的網(wǎng)友Jack寫一封電子郵件，說明你想與他見面，并去參觀他的學校．同時告訴他，你準備了中國結作為禮物贈送給他，感謝他在網(wǎng)上解答你在英語學習上的問題．
注意：1．詞數(shù)100左右； 2．可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫；3．參考詞匯：中國結：Chinese knot
Dear Jack，
How are you doing these days？
I'm writing this letter to tell you I'm at a summer camp in London now，and I think it's a good chance for us to meet and have a talk．（高分句型一）You know，I always want to know what your school is like and I'm also very curious about your school life．（高分句型二）If convenient，it will be great to visit your school during my stay in London．
By the way，I bring a small gift for you，which is a fine Chinese knot．（高分句型三）I really thank you for your patient and clear explanation of my questions on English learning before．
I'm looking forward to your reply．
Yours，
LiHua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇書面表達屬于提綱類作文，根據(jù)提示信息假設你是李華，正在英國倫敦參加夏令營．請給在該市的網(wǎng)友Jack寫一封電子郵件，說明你想與他見面，并去參觀他的學校．同時告訴他，你準備了中國結作為禮物贈送給他，感謝他在網(wǎng)上解答你在英語學習上的問題．寫作時注意以下幾點：1、仔細閱讀有關提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息   2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內進行分析、構思和想象．要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關系來寫．本文寫作時可以按照要點所給的順序寫．3、根據(jù)要表達的內容確定句子的時態(tài)、語態(tài)．4．注意使用高級詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點．
【亮點說明】本文結構緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達：be curious about 對…好奇；By the way順便說一下；look forward to 盼望；If convenient如果方便的話；
I'm writing this letter to tell you I'm at a summer camp in London now，and I think it's a good chance for us to meet and have a talk．（高分句型一）
You know，I always want to know what your school is like and I'm also very curious about your school life．（高分句型二）
  By the way，I bring a small gift for you，which is a fine Chinese knot．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Jack，
      How are you doing these days？
      I'm writing this letter to tell you I'm at a summer camp in London now，and I think it's a good chance for us to meet and have a talk．（高分句型一）You know，I always want to know what your school is like and I'm also very curious about your school life．（高分句型二）If convenient，it will be great to visit your school during my stay in London．
     By the way，I bring a small gift for you，which is a fine Chinese knot．（高分句型三）I really thank you for your patient and clear explanation of my questions on English learning before．
      I'm looking forward to your reply．
                                                                                                                                                                                                      Yours，
                                                                                                                                                                                                      Li Hua

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強的測試題．它不僅考查學生的寫作基礎而且還考查學生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態(tài)呼應，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓練：一是語言基礎方面的訓練，要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．