Question

【題目】假如你叫李華，你發(fā)現(xiàn)有些同學常常因為考試而感到焦慮。為此你向一家英文報社寫信，反映這個問題，并提出建議。

要點如下：

1. 對此表示理解。

2. 提出三條合理建議。

注意：1. 詞數(shù)：120詞左右，短文的開頭已為你寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)。

2. 短文要包括所有要點，可適當發(fā)揮，以使行文連貫。

3. 注意人稱使用。

Dear Editor,

I am writing to tell you that many students experience exam anxiety in our school.

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Sincerely yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】

One possible version:

Dear editor,

I am writing to tell you that many students experience exam anxiety in our school.

It is natural that we feel a bit nervous before exams, but some students have real trouble managing their anxiety, which of course will affect their performance in the exams. Here I’d like to give those students some tips on how to get rid of the stress.

First of all, it’s important to have a right attitude towards exams. They are only a means of checking how we are getting along with our studies, so there is no need to worry too much about the results. At the same time, study hard every day and make careful plans for every exam. If we are prepared, we will not feel worried. However, if anyone still finds himself much too stressed, don’t hesitate to seek some professional help from the school psychologist.

At last, I hope all of us will be free from anxiety and do our best in exams.

Yours, Li Hua

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇書信寫作。文章的大致內(nèi)容已經(jīng)給出，但其中的第二條內(nèi)容卻是靠考生自己聯(lián)系實際自由發(fā)揮的，發(fā)展空間很大寫作時要注意句與句，段與段之間連詞的使用。以保證文章的連貫性。

亮點說明：文章內(nèi)容分為三部分：除卻題目已給出的句子外，題目所要求的第一個內(nèi)容用it is natural that句型一筆帶過，然后用but引導的句子和here引導的句子過渡到第二個內(nèi)容，最后用at last 進行銜接，表達愿望，結(jié)構(gòu)清楚，內(nèi)容連貫。本文使用了許多句子結(jié)構(gòu)some students have real trouble managing their anxiety, which of course will affect their performance in the exams.使用了which引導的非限制性定語從句， there is no need to worry too much about the results使用了there is no need 句型，If we are prepared, we will not feel worried. 中if語句的使用，don’t hesitate to seek some professional help from the school psychologist.祈使句的使用等等；文中連詞也使用的恰到好處，比如first of all，at the same time，however等等使語言連貫。本文還用來許多好的短語，如;have a right attitude towards，a means of，I’d like to，seek some professional help。