Question

7．微笑是世界語(yǔ)言，它可以給人勇氣、信心、安慰…，讓人與人之間的相處更加和諧．請(qǐng)你用英語(yǔ)寫一篇關(guān)于微笑的短文，詞數(shù)100～120．要求如下：
1．描述一次與微笑有關(guān)的經(jīng)歷；
2．說(shuō)說(shuō)你的感受及微笑的意義．
注意：開頭已給出（不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）．
Smiling is a universal language，which can give us courage，confidence and comforts．                                 ．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇關(guān)于微笑的短文．根據(jù)題目要求可知用第一人稱來(lái)敘述，時(shí)態(tài)以一般過(guò)去時(shí)態(tài)（敘述一次與微笑有關(guān)的經(jīng)歷）和一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)（敘述自己的感受及微笑的意義）．內(nèi)容主要包括：一一次與微笑有關(guān)的經(jīng)歷；二自己的感受及微笑的意義．
高分句型：
1．I think smiling not only makes us happy but also helps build up our confidence，which makes a difference to our life．句子里not only…but also表示"不但…而且"；which 引導(dǎo)非限制性定語(yǔ)從句，代指主句．
我認(rèn)為微笑不僅讓我高興，而且有助于增強(qiáng)我們的自信，這會(huì)對(duì)我們有很大的影響．
2．Only when you smile to the world will the world smile at you．
句子里Only 引導(dǎo)狀語(yǔ)位于句首，主句用倒裝will the world smile at you．
只有當(dāng)你對(duì)世界微笑的時(shí)候，世界才會(huì)對(duì)你微笑．

解答 Smiling is a universal_language，which_can give_us_courage，confidence and_comforts．
I still remember how upset I was when it was my turn to recite a poem before class．Feeling nervous and shy，I forgot almost everything．I decided to give up，but all my classmates，especially my teacher kept smiling at me encouragingly．Their smiles warmed me so much that I got over the difficulty and eventually made it．（一次與微笑有關(guān)的經(jīng)歷）
I think smiling not only makes us happy but also helps build up our confidence，which makes a difference to our life．【高分句型一】Furthermore，it will improve the relationship between us．It's smiling that brings harmony to our life．Only when you smile to the world will the world smile at you．【高分句型二】Therefore，keep smiling and show your best to the world．（自己的感受及微笑的意義）

點(diǎn)評(píng) 考查提綱類作文．
本文用了部分倒裝．部分倒裝主要有以下幾種：
1．用于疑問(wèn)句．
例如：Do they work in the factory？他們?cè)谶@家工廠上班嗎？
2．用于省略的虛擬條件狀語(yǔ)從句．
例如：Had I seen him yesterday wouldn't go to his house now．如果我昨天見到他了，我現(xiàn)在就不去他家了．
3．用于"形容詞（或名詞、動(dòng)詞）+as （ though ）"引導(dǎo)的讓步狀語(yǔ)從句中．例如：
Try as he would，he might failed again．他雖然可以試試，可能還會(huì)失�。�
4．用于 no sooner …than …，hardly …when 和 not until 等句型．
No sooner had I come in，the telephone rang．我剛進(jìn)屋，電話鈴就響了．
5．用于 never，hardly，seldom，scarcely，barely，little，at no time，not only 等開頭的句子．
Seldom does he come late．他很少遲到．
6．用于"only+狀語(yǔ)"開頭的句子．
Only then did he know he was wrong．直到那時(shí)他才知道他錯(cuò)了．
7．用于"so+形容詞/副詞"放在句首的 so …that 句子．
So fast is he running that he can keep up with the bike．他跑得快得能跟上自行車．