Question

英語(yǔ)課上，老師要求同桌同學(xué)相互修改作文。假設(shè)以下作文為你同桌所寫(xiě)，請(qǐng)你對(duì)其進(jìn)行修改。共有10處錯(cuò)誤，每句最多兩處。錯(cuò)誤涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。
增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏詞符號(hào)（∧），并在此符號(hào)下面寫(xiě)出該加的詞。
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線(xiàn)（\）劃掉。
修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線(xiàn)，并在該詞下面寫(xiě)出修改后的詞。
注意：1 每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞。
2 只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不記分。
3 必須按答題要求做題，否則不給分。
Dear Tom,
It is great to receive your email. Now I’d like tell you something which took place in my school yesterday.
In the afternoon we hold a grown –up ceremony for our coming 18 years old birthday. First we made an oath that as grown-up we should have a sense of duty for our social from now on. Then we showed our thanks for to our parents who had gone through hardships to bring us up and teachers who have been educating us patient. And our teachers also gave us cards expressed their good wishes to them. Finally, we put on wonderful performances, singing or dancing. We learned a lot from the activity. I think it’s very important for us. I will never forget the day in my life.
Yours,
Li Hua

Answer 1

【小題1】would like后面加to
【小題2】which改成that
【小題3】hold改成 Held
【小題4】grown-up后面加s
【小題5】social改成society
【小題6】for改成to
【小題7】expressed改成 expressing
【小題8】patient改成 patiently
【小題9】us.改成them
【小題10】or改成 and

解析【小題1】固定結(jié)構(gòu)would like to do sth
【小題2】先行詞是指物的不定代詞，關(guān)系代詞用that
【小題3】講述的是過(guò)去發(fā)生的故事，用過(guò)去時(shí)
【小題4】成年人的復(fù)數(shù)在grown后面加
【小題5】society是名詞“社會(huì)”
【小題6】show sth to sb向某人展示sth
【小題7】?jī)烧咧�間構(gòu)成主動(dòng)關(guān)系用現(xiàn)在分詞的形式
【小題8】修飾動(dòng)詞用副詞
【小題9】這里是給他們的祝福
【小題10】上下文是并列關(guān)系而非選擇關(guān)系