Question

15．假定你是李華，你的英國筆友Tom來信詢問你最喜歡的運動項目．請你根據(jù)以下提示，通過電子郵仵向他介紹你最喜歡的運動．
1．何時開始喜歡此項運動；
2．現(xiàn)在練習的情況；
3．給你帶來的益處．
注意：1．詞數(shù)100左右；
2．可以適當發(fā)揮，以使行文連貫；
3．信的開頭和結尾已經(jīng)給出，不計入總詞數(shù)．
Dear Tom，
Nice to receive your e-mail．I'd like to tell you about my favounte sport，
                                                             
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 重點句型
1．With time going on，I have learned many practical skills and won the first place in my school．
隨著不斷的練習，我已經(jīng)學會了許多實戰(zhàn)技巧并且在學校贏得第一．
with引導的伴隨狀語，由with+賓語+賓語補足語構成，賓語補足語可由現(xiàn)在分詞、過去分詞、形容詞、副詞或介詞短語充當，在句中做狀語，表示伴隨．
2．In my opinion，not only does the sport help me build up my body，train my brains and keep me confident，but also it helps me make a lot of friends．
在我看來，運動不僅僅幫我鍛煉我的身體，訓練我的大腦，使我保持自信，同時它還幫我結實了許多的朋友．
not only…but also…意為不僅…而且…，當not only位于句首時，后接句子須主謂倒裝，but also后接部分不用倒裝．

解答 Dear Tom，
        Nice to receive your e-mail．I'd like to tell you about my favourite sport，table tennis，which is the most popular sport in China【說明自己最喜歡的運動-乒乓球】
        At the age of six，I began to learn to play table tennis from my parents，who are good at it．Since then，I've fallen in love with it and spent most of my free time playing it．Now I often practise playing tennis with my friends and coach
in my spare time．【重點句型一】With time going on，I have learned many practical skills and won the first place in my school．【說明自己與乒乓球結緣經(jīng)過，并介紹現(xiàn)在練習情況及成果】
【重點句型二】In my opinion，not only does the sport help me build up my body，train my brains and keep me confident，but also it helps me make a lot of friends．Therefore，I like it  best of all the sports．【說明喜歡原因以及乒乓球給自己帶來的益處】
Yours，
Li Hua

點評 考生在文章第二段，以6歲、從那之后、現(xiàn)在3個時間點來說明自己從與乒乓球結緣到贏得學校第一的過程，畫面感強烈，使人印象深刻．考生在寫作時，應根據(jù)提綱，緊扣提綱來擴展內容，語言生動有趣，前后呼應．