Question

18．假定你是李華，你校的交流生Lucy下周打算去老師家做客，但是她不知道中國人做客有哪此傳統(tǒng)，她給你發(fā)了一封電子郵件，請你給她一些建議．請你根據(jù)下列要點，給她回復(fù)一封電子郵件．
要點如下：
1．適當(dāng)?shù)厮鸵恍┒Y物．
2．介紹中國的餐桌禮儀．
注意：
1．詞數(shù)100左右．（開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)）
2．可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫．
Dear Lucy，
I have received your email．You asked me for some suggestions on how to be a guest in China．Here are some suggestions received by most Chinese．Firstly，when you visit a Chinese family，you'd better bring some gifts．In China，it is usually considered impolite to visit someone with nothing in hand．（高分句型一）So，you can buy some fresh fruits or a box of milk．What's more，table manners are also of great importance．We Chinese like to treat our guests with many delicious dishes．When at table，you should not begin eating first，but followthe host or the senior one．（高分句型二）Sometimes，the host will help you with some dishes，which is different from western traditions，and you should show your appreciation．（高分句型三）
All in all，just as the old saying goes，"when in Rome，do as Romans do．"（高分句型四）
I do hope you will enjoy yourself in your teacher's home．
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇書面表達屬于提綱類作文，根據(jù)提示信息你校的交流生Lucy下周打算去老師家做客，但是她不知道中國人做客有哪此傳統(tǒng)，她給你發(fā)了一封電子郵件，請你給她一些建議．請你根據(jù)下列要點，給她回復(fù)一封電子郵件，寫作時注意以下幾點：1、仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確幾個要點：適當(dāng)?shù)厮鸵恍┒Y物；介紹中國的餐桌禮儀．2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進行分析、構(gòu)思和想象．要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來寫．本文寫作時可以按照要點所給的順序?qū)懀?、根據(jù)要表達的內(nèi)容確定句子的時態(tài)、語態(tài)；就本文而言應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)．4．注意使用高級詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點．
【亮點說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達：Firstly首先；What's more而且；Sometimes有時候；is different from與…不同；All in all總之
In China，it is usually considered impolite to visit someone with nothing in hand．（高分句型一）
When at table，you should not begin eating first，but follow the host or the senior one．（高分句型二）
Sometimes，the host will help you with some dishes，which is different from western traditions，and you should show your appreciation．（高分句型三）
All in all，just as the old saying goes，"when in Rome，do as Romans do．"（高分句型四）

解答 Dear Lucy，
       I have received your email．You asked me for some suggestions on how to be a guest in China．Here are some suggestions received by most Chinese．
       Firstly，when you visit a Chinese family，you'd better bring some gifts．In China，it is usually considered impolite to visit someone with nothing in hand．（高分句型一）So，you can buy some fresh fruits or a box of milk．What's more，table manners are also of great importance．We Chinese like to treat our guests with many delicious dishes．When at table，you should not begin eating first，but follow the host or the senior one．（高分句型二）Sometimes，the host will help you with some dishes，which is different from western traditions，and you should show your appreciation．（高分句型三）All in all，just as the old saying goes，"when in Rome，do as Romans do．"（高分句型四）
       I do hope you will enjoy yourself in your teacher's home．
                                                                                                                                                                                                             Yours sincerely，
                                                                                                                                                                                                                  Li Hua

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強的測試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．