Question

請根據(jù)你對右邊這幅畫的理解用英語寫一篇短文。內(nèi)容要求：

 

1.描述漫畫內(nèi)容，如情景，人物，動作等。

2.結(jié)合自身實際，談?wù)勀愕母邢搿?/p>

3.舉例說明你能在尊老愛老方面做些什么。

注意：

1.詞數(shù)120左右。

2.參考詞匯：按摩 massage n.&v.

 

 

 

 

Answer 1

Respecting the elders is a good virtue. As is shown in the picture, a granddaughter might have realized that her grandma is tired from doing housework, so she thinks that she should do something about it. So she gives her grandmother a gentle back massage, hoping that it can reduce her grandma’s tiredness.

This reminds me of my parents and grandparents who have been doing whatever they can do to let me have the best education. But, totally absorbed in my own study, I seldom take notice of their tiredness and never offer to do something to make them feel comfortable.

Now I know I can do my bit to help them with everyday cleaning, or at least clean my own bedroom, or massage their feet or legs before bedtime to help them reduce the tiredness. Meanwhile, I will work harder at my lessons. I know my progress is the best reward for their love.

【解析】

試題分析：題目要求根據(jù)所給漫畫寫一篇短文，寫作要點包括：描述漫畫內(nèi)容；結(jié)合自身談?wù)劯邢�；舉例說明。看圖作文先詳細(xì)描述漫畫的內(nèi)容，包括情景、人物、動作等方面；詞數(shù)在120詞左右，用上參考詞匯；不要出現(xiàn)標(biāo)點和拼寫錯誤，保持卷面整潔、字體美觀；注意行文的連貫性。

亮點說明：

范文使用了非謂語動詞Respecting the elders is a good virtue.，hoping that it can reduce her grandma’s tiredness，absorbed in；非限制性定語從句As is shown in the picture；虛擬語氣might have realized；賓語從句that her grandma is tired from doing housework，that she should do something about it，whatever they can do，I can do my bit to help them with everyday cleaning；定語從句who have been doing whatever they can do等語法知識，其中，使用最多的是賓語從句，語法知識的使用提升了作文的檔次；

范文使用But, Meanwhile,等銜接前后句子和段落，使作文語意連貫、通順；

范文使用remind... of，take notice of，help...with，at least，work at等短語，充實了作文內(nèi)容；

考點：看圖作文