Question

【題目】假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫的以下短文。短文中共有10處錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯(cuò)誤涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（∧），并在此符號(hào)下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（＼）劃掉。

修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1.每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2.只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。

I am writing to tell you anything about the transportation in China.Over the past few decades we have developed an amazed network of public transportation.Besides,we have been decided to make efforts to make them much better.I am sure a network will satisfy your needs for traveling everywhere more convenient.People usually chose the means of transportation based with some aspects,such as the cost and the time needed.For example, businessmen are more likely travel by plane or high—speed train to save time while office worker tend to take buses or drive to work themselves.

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【解析】【1】 Over the past few decades we have developed an amazed network of public transportation.以ing結(jié)尾的形容詞一般用來形容物，意為：令人……的，故應(yīng)把amazed改為amazing。

【2】we have been decided to make efforts to make them much better.we和decide的關(guān)系為主動(dòng)關(guān)系，故應(yīng)把been去掉。

【3】 ……make efforts to make them much better，結(jié)合上一句，這里表達(dá)應(yīng)該是：努力使公共交通網(wǎng)絡(luò)變的更好。故應(yīng)把them改成it。

【4】I am sure a network will satisfy your needs for……，

【5】……traveling everywhere more convenient，到處旅游更方便了，修飾動(dòng)詞應(yīng)該用副詞，故應(yīng)把convenient改成conveniently。

【6】People usually chose the means of transportation……，這句話是在陳述一個(gè)事實(shí)，所以時(shí)態(tài)應(yīng)該為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，故應(yīng)把chose改成choose。

【7】……based with some aspects，短語詞組based on意為：基于……。

【8】……such as the cost and the time needing.比如需要的花銷和時(shí)間，cost，time和need之間為被動(dòng)關(guān)系，故應(yīng)把needing改成needed。

【9】businessmen are more likely travel by plane or high - speed train ……，固定搭配be likely to do sth 意為很有可能做某事，故應(yīng)在likely后面加to。

【10】 ……while office worker tend to take buses or drive to work themselves.worker為可數(shù)名詞，故應(yīng)把worker改成workers。