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書面表達(dá) （滿分25分）
假定你是一名中學(xué)生，名叫王林，寫一封建議信給21st Century的編輯，反映目前濫養(yǎng)寵物的問題。你認(rèn)為寵物過多，噪音擾民；污染環(huán)境；你周圍許多人尤其是小孩都曾經(jīng)被嚇到或咬傷；甚至?xí)��?dǎo)致某些疾病的傳播，所以你希望得到媒體的關(guān)注和支持。
注意：1、詞數(shù)120左右
2、短文開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
Dear editor,
I’m sorry to occupy your precious time ,but I really want to tell you something about he problem of some people keeping too many pets nowadays.
                                                                              
                                                                              
                                                                              
                                                                                                                                                             
                                                                              
                                                                              
                                                                              
Yours truly
wang lin

Answer 1

March  28,  2010
Dear editor,
I’m sorry to occupy your precious time , but I really want to tell you something about the problem of some people keeping too many pets nowadays.
I consider the problem more and more serious for the following reasons. First of all, as is known to people, pets make too much noise that troubles residents a lot. What’s more ，it’s widely accepted that animal wastes pollute the environment which makes people quite uncomfortable. Many owners like taking their pets to public places where they may frighten children or even sometimes bite people. The most important is that pets can spread some diseases and this has attracted much attention.
Taking all these factors into consideration, I sincerely hope that I can get help from you and expect the media to do something for this.
Yours truly
wang lin

這是一篇以提綱寫建議信的作文。信的開頭結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，只要寫出正文就行，要點(diǎn)已經(jīng)很明確，反映目前濫養(yǎng)寵物的問題。重點(diǎn)也很突出，有5個(gè)要點(diǎn)，只要把各個(gè)要點(diǎn)加以發(fā)揮，注意遣詞造句的靈活性和語法規(guī)則的正確性，適當(dāng)運(yùn)用復(fù)雜句，如as is known to people, pets make too much noise that troubles residents a lot.和 it’s widely accepted that animal wastes pollute the environment which makes people quite uncomfortable.但要注意，文章必須加上一些關(guān)聯(lián)詞是文章更通順。