Question

17．下面這篇短文共有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處．錯(cuò)誤涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改．
    增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符合（^），并在其下面寫(xiě)出該加的詞．
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉．
    修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃-橫線，并在該詞下面寫(xiě)出修改后的詞．
    注意：1．每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；
          2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分．
A health diet and regular exercise may help to prevent obesity among children．Take Li Ming as example．Li Ming used to being a healthy boy，but over a year ago，He got into a bad habit of eating a lot of junk food and snacks．Besides，he spends  a lot of time lying on the sofa，watching TV，and did few exercise．As a result，she  put on so much weight that he found difficult to climb the stairs．But Li Ming decided to change the unhealthy life style．He began to have a balancing healthy diet．He also took an activie part in various sports activities such as swimming，skating，running and play basketball．Months late，Li Ming became as fit as before．

Answer 1

分析 本文以Li Ming 為例告訴我們一味地吃垃圾食品和甜食，不去做運(yùn)動(dòng)會(huì)導(dǎo)致體重增加，健康的飲食和有規(guī)律的鍛煉可以阻止兒童便肥胖．

解答 A health diet and regular exercise may help to prevent obesity among children．Take Li Ming as example．Li Ming used to being a healthy boy，but over a year ago，He got into a bad habit of eating a lot of junk food and snacks．Besides，he spends  a lot of time lying on the sofa，watching TV，and did few exercise．As a result，she  put on so much weight that he found∧difficult to climb the stairs．But Li Ming decided to change the unhealthy life style．He began to have a balancing healthy diet．He also took an activie part in various sports activities such as swimming，skating，running and play basketball．Months late，Li Ming became as fit as before．
詳解：
1．health改為healthy；考查形容詞，此處用形容詞作定語(yǔ)修飾名詞diet．
2．a(chǎn)s改為for；考查介詞，take sth for example是固定搭配，意為"以…為例"．
3．being改為be；考查動(dòng)詞，used to do是固定短語(yǔ)，意為"過(guò)去常常…"．
4．a(chǎn)改為the；考查冠詞，habit后面有介詞短語(yǔ)of eating a lot of junk food and snacks限定，故用the表示特指．
5．spends改為spent；考查動(dòng)詞的時(shí)態(tài)，本文講的是過(guò)去發(fā)生的事情，故用一般過(guò)去時(shí)．
6．did改為doing；考查并列結(jié)構(gòu)，這里用doing與前面的lying 和watching構(gòu)成并列成分，
7．she改為he；考查人稱代詞，根據(jù)上文的a healthy boy可知此處要用he．
8．found后面加it；考查代詞，這里it在句中做形式賓語(yǔ)，真正的賓語(yǔ)為后面的不定式短語(yǔ)．
9．But改為So；考查連詞，結(jié)合上下文分析，后面的decided to change the unhealthy life style是上文內(nèi)容導(dǎo)致的結(jié)果，故用so表示結(jié)果．
10．balancing改為balanced；考查分詞作定語(yǔ)，這里diet和動(dòng)詞balance是動(dòng)賓關(guān)系，故用過(guò)去分詞作定語(yǔ)．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 短文改錯(cuò)時(shí)首先要掌握短文的中心思想，然后根據(jù)上下文語(yǔ)境，分析句式結(jié)構(gòu)，利用所掌握的詞匯，語(yǔ)法等基礎(chǔ)知識(shí)找出錯(cuò)誤加以改正．