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【題目】假如你是紅星中學(xué)高三學(xué)生李華。請根據(jù)以下四幅圖的先后順序，給�？�“英語角”寫一篇英文稿件，以“My Spring Festival Without Fireworks”為題，介紹你和家人過2018年春節(jié)的全過程。

注意：詞數(shù)不少于60。

提示詞：廟會(huì) temple fair （試題版權(quán)：百強(qiáng)校英語解析團(tuán)隊(duì)專供）

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Answer 1

【答案】My Spring Festival Without Fireworks

Before the Chinese Spring Festival, a notice was posted on Beijing TV, calling upon the citizens of Beijing not to set off fire crackers for the sake of the improvement of air quality. The ban on fireworks was highly recognized by my family.

Although there were no fireworks, the festival atmosphere wasn’t lighter. United with my grandparents on the Eve of the festival, we took our time to have our big meal, enjoying the Spring Festival gala without the interruption of the noise of the firecrackers. On the festival, together with my family, I visited different temple fairs, where a lot of Chinese traditional performances were on show. I was so amazed by a lion dance with four lions standing on a small ball that I couldn’t help taking pictures. But what attracted me most in the temple fairs was the foods from all over China.

After the festival, it was surprised that every citizen received a letter of thanks from the government for what we had done during the festival. Without fireworks, the air pollution, as well as the number of fire cases, was greatly reduced. I am proud to be one of the citizens and believe that one small change made by everyone can contribute to making a better city.

【解析】本文屬于圖畫作文。圖畫作文的寫作要領(lǐng)：1、根據(jù)提示，準(zhǔn)確審題。要注意文體，人物和時(shí)態(tài)。2、認(rèn)真讀圖，把握情境，進(jìn)行圖文轉(zhuǎn)換。從整體上把握所呈現(xiàn)的主要內(nèi)容，圍繞特定的主題合理想象。然后將圖畫所傳達(dá)的信息以文字的形式呈現(xiàn)出來，并對(duì)轉(zhuǎn)換后的內(nèi)容重新組合，確定主要內(nèi)容。 3、發(fā)表感想。圍繞主題展開合理的想象，發(fā)表自己的聯(lián)想或感想。4、確定段落，擬好提綱，斟酌詞句，組句成文。

亮點(diǎn)：本文要點(diǎn)齊全，寫作層次清楚，以時(shí)間順序展開全文，能緊扣圖片要點(diǎn)，上下文連貫。在表達(dá)句式上，既有主動(dòng)語態(tài)又用被動(dòng)語態(tài)，句式結(jié)構(gòu)靈活多變。既簡單句又有并列句，還有大量的復(fù)合句，如定語從句，狀語從句和名詞從句，恰當(dāng)?shù)厥褂梅侵^語，句式靈活生動(dòng)而豐富多彩。文章中大量地運(yùn)用了較高級(jí)詞匯，從而增加文章的可讀性。

第一段開門見山地提出春節(jié)前北京禁放煙花爆竹的禁令。在這一段中運(yùn)用了由before引導(dǎo)狀語從句，在從句中運(yùn)用了非謂語（calling upon the citizens of Beijing not to set off fire crackers）

第二段中指出雖沒有煙花但節(jié)日氣氛一點(diǎn)沒有少。在本段中講述了春節(jié)期間和家人過2018年春節(jié)的全過程。本段中的句式最為復(fù)雜。文中運(yùn)用了由although引導(dǎo)的狀語從句，非謂語作狀語（United with my grandparents on the Eve of the festival, we…enjoying the Spring Festival），where引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句（…, where lot of Chinese traditional performances were on show），so…that…的常用句型；主語從句（what attracted me most in the temple fairs was the foods from all over China）

最后一段敘述了節(jié)日過后人們對(duì)此的反映。在本段中運(yùn)用了常用句式（, it was surprised that從句）和賓語從句（…for what we had done during the festival）及復(fù)雜句（I am proud to be one of the citizens and believe that one small change made by everyone can contribute to making a better city.）。