Question

12．假如你是李華目前正在一所外國語學(xué)校讀高中．最近一段時間你比較關(guān)注美國文化尤其對美國的節(jié)日感興趣．請你給你的美國網(wǎng)友Tom寫信
1．介紹自己的近況；
2．詢問關(guān)于感恩節(jié)的一些情況（起源、慶祝的時間和方式等）；
3．表示感謝．
注意：1．詞數(shù)100左右；
可以適當(dāng)增加細節(jié)以使行文連貫；
開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好但不計入總詞數(shù)．
Thank for your e-mail last time．
                                                     
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 1．本文是一篇書信類作文．文章給出了寫作內(nèi)容要點，大家需要根據(jù)寫作內(nèi)容要點進行拓展．成文時要注意：1．文章主要用第一人稱；2．時態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時；3．文章的內(nèi)容要點要齊全．
2．注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型，以提高文章的檔次．賓語從句：I'd like to tell you that I am now focusing my attention on American culture；主語從句：What attracts me most is …；條件狀語從句中的虛擬語氣：I would appreciate it greatly if you could tell me something about it．
3．靈活使用短語：focus attention on，spend the festival，in person，know about，give assistance in．
4．注意使用一些連接詞，使得文章表達自然、流暢：when，since．
I'd like to tell you that I am now focusing my attention on American culture，especially American festivals．（高分句型一）
When it comes to American festivals，what attracts me most is Thanksgiving Day．（高分句型二）
I would appreciate it greatly if you could tell me something about it．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Tom，
       Thanks for your e-mail last time．I'd like to tell you that I am now focusing my attention on American culture，especially American festivals．（高分句型一）
       When it comes to American festivals，what attracts me most is Thanksgiving Day．（高分句型二）Since I have never spent the festival in America in person，I know little about it．I would appreciate it greatly if you could tell me something about it．（高分句型三） My questions are as follows：How did it come into being？How and when do people celebrate it？What's its significance？
       I hope you can give me assistance in this problem and thank you in advance．
       Best wishes!
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                               Yours，
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                        Li Hua

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強的測試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．