Question

隨著經(jīng)濟(jì)的發(fā)展，人們對自己形象越來越關(guān)注。每個人都想變得更加美麗，包括那些已經(jīng)很美貌的著名影星。為了實(shí)現(xiàn)減肥目標(biāo)，人們采取不同的措施。有些人有規(guī)律的去健身房鍛煉，有些人節(jié)食或者只吃蔬菜，還有一些人吃減肥藥或者去做整容手術(shù)，導(dǎo)致健康受損。但是，我認(rèn)為…….

注：1. 翻譯短文 ，并根據(jù)提示添加2-3個自己的觀點(diǎn)。

2. 字?jǐn)?shù)在150字左右

3. 參考詞匯：經(jīng)濟(jì) economy, 整容手術(shù) plastic surgery

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Answer 1

With the development of economy, people pay more and more attention to their appearance. Everybody wants to be more beautiful, including those famous actors and actresses who are already good-looking. To achieve the goal of losing weight, people take different measures. Some people work out regularly in the gym, some other people go on a diet or eat only vegetables, and there is also a small number of people taking weight-loss pills or even turning to plastic surgery, doing harm to their health. But in my opinion, ……

【解析】

試題分析：寫作中已經(jīng)給出漢語，寫作要求考生翻譯這篇短文，并加入自己對于經(jīng)濟(jì)發(fā)展了，現(xiàn)在很多人追求美的觀點(diǎn)和看法，對他們某些損傷健康追求美的評論�？忌�需要熟練運(yùn)用自己的所學(xué)知識，掌握的語法知識來流暢的清楚的表達(dá)自己的想法。寫作亮點(diǎn)：文章中運(yùn)用了大量的短語增加了文章的連貫性，使文章讀起來更加朗朗上口。例如：with the development of 在…發(fā)展之下；pay more attention to日益專注，更加關(guān)心；take measure采取措施；work out 制定出；go on a die節(jié)食；…為文章增添了許多亮點(diǎn)。句中還運(yùn)用了句型，who引導(dǎo)的定語從句；there be的句型……讓文章增添了色彩。成為一篇優(yōu)秀的短文。

考點(diǎn)：考查論述類文章。