Question

10．近些年來，隨著網(wǎng)絡(luò)的普及，越來越多的學(xué)生的書寫能力明顯退步了．為了改變這種局面，保護(hù)民族文化--漢字，我校學(xué)生會提出以下倡議：
1、減少課外上網(wǎng)時間，多讀書；2、養(yǎng)成每天記日記的好習(xí)慣，練習(xí)書寫；
3、少發(fā)電子郵件，盡量動手給親朋好友寫書信．
請你根據(jù)以上內(nèi)容，代學(xué)生會寫一封英文倡議書．
注意：
1、詞數(shù)：100左右．2、可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫．3、漢字（character）
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Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
In order to protect our Chinese characters and improve our handwriting，we'd like to offer some suggestions．為了保護(hù)中國的民族文化提高書寫水平，我們提出以下建議：
高分句型二：
First，we should spend less time online so that we can have more time to read books．
首先，我們應(yīng)該少花時間在網(wǎng)絡(luò)上，那樣才有更多的時間來閱讀．
句型一 In order to protect our Chinese characters and improve our handwriting…該句在句首使用了固定短語：in order to do sth 為了…放在句首作目的狀語
句型二 so that we can have more time to read books  該句是一個由so that 引導(dǎo)的目的狀語從句
除此以外，還有以下短語和高級詞匯：what's more 而且     form the habit of doing sth 養(yǎng)成．．習(xí)慣

解答 In recent years，many of us spend a lot of time on the Internet with its popularity．As a result，we don't write as well as we did in the past．In order to protect our Chinese characters and improve our handwriting，we'd like to offer some suggestions：（提出話題）（高分句型一）
     First，we should spend less time online so that we can have more time to read books．（高分句型二）Besides，we'd better form the habit of keeping diaries every day to practice handwriting．What's more，it is better to write letters to our relatives and friends by hand rather than send e-mails．（方法展示）
     As the saying goes，"The style is the man．"Beautiful and neat handwriting is beneficial to us students．So please pay more attention to our handwriting in the future．
     Let's take action now!
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點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強的測試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．