Question

假如你叫李華,給你的美國(guó)筆友Tom寫(xiě)一封100詞左右的信,談?wù)勀闳オ{子山
旅游的事情。內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)如下:
1. 前不久和三個(gè)朋友游覽獅子山；
2. 山頂有廟,稍南有元代著名學(xué)者之墓,墓碑上的字難以辨認(rèn)；
3. 山坡上有很多松樹(shù),據(jù)說(shuō)其中的兩棵松樹(shù)有500多年的歷史；
4. 傍晚下山回家,大腦中留下了美好的回憶。
注意:1. 參考詞匯:  Mount Lion獅子山；scholar學(xué)者；tomb-stone墓碑；
2. 首尾句已經(jīng)給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
Dear Tom,
     I was so pleased to hear from you and am writing to tell you something about my visit to Mount Lion.
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I really hope that one day you can visit Mount Lion with us.
       Best wishes！
  Yours,LiHua.

Answer 1

Dear Tom,
     I was so pleased to hear from you. Now I am writing to tell you something about my visit to Mount Lion.
     The other day I visited Mount Lion with three of my friends. When we got to the top at noon, we were tired, but the scenery there was so beautiful that we forgot our tiredness. On the top of the hill stands a temple, a little south of which lies the tomb of a famous scholar of Yuan Dynasty. We could hardly read the characters on the tombstone. There were many pine trees on the hill. It is said that two of them are over five hundred years old. It was late in the afternoon that we set off for home with a beautiful memory in our mind.
     I really hope that one day you can visit Mount Lion with us.
     Best wishes!
Yours,LiHua

試題分析：考查提綱類短文寫(xiě)作。向筆友敘述旅游獅子山的經(jīng)歷，文章的要點(diǎn)都給了出來(lái)，考生需要以時(shí)間為順序把要點(diǎn)翻譯成英語(yǔ)。在寫(xiě)作的時(shí)候注意使用高級(jí)的句式，不要總是使用單調(diào)的陳述句，可以變化使用倒裝句，省略句等多種形式來(lái)表示。
考點(diǎn)：考查提綱類短文寫(xiě)作
點(diǎn)評(píng)：提綱類的短文寫(xiě)作是考生一直在訓(xùn)練的文章類型。本文在審題時(shí)要注意是過(guò)去時(shí)，要一時(shí)間為順序來(lái)組織全文，不要遺漏文章的要點(diǎn)。在寫(xiě)作的時(shí)候注意選擇高級(jí)的詞匯來(lái)提升文章的層次。