書面表達(dá)(滿分25分)

現(xiàn)在越來越多的人在周末或假期到社區(qū)做義工。上周你班同學(xué)到當(dāng)?shù)匾患腋@嚎赐先。?qǐng)根據(jù)下列要點(diǎn)給China Daily寫一篇短文,介紹活動(dòng)情況。

給老人們讀報(bào)、打掃衛(wèi)生等;

與老人們交流;

你的感想。

注意:

詞數(shù):100詞左右,文章開頭已寫出(不計(jì)入總次數(shù));

可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),使行文連貫;

生詞:福利院 welfare house。

 

Nowadays, more and more people choose to be volunteers in the community in their spare time.

 

 

 

 

Nowadays, more and more people choose to be volunteers in the community at their spare time. Last week our class went to a local welfare house to visit the old people.

My classmates and I did what we could to help them. Some cleaned the rooms, gardens and all the places which needed to be cleaned; some read newspapers and magazines to the old people; others talked happily with the lonely ones. We tried our best to show our love and care and we actually did it.

Frankly speaking, we were so happy that day. When we helped others, we also get something more important. That is when you pay, you gain. So please show your love, show your care, and our society will be more beautiful and more harmonious.

【解析】

試題分析:本文是一篇給China Daily介紹同學(xué)們義工活動(dòng)情況而寫的報(bào)道,開頭已經(jīng)給出,所以只注意組織好篇章結(jié)構(gòu)和要點(diǎn)的表述即可。其中要點(diǎn)包括1.給老人們讀報(bào)、打掃衛(wèi)生等;2.與老人們交流;3.你的感想。動(dòng)筆前要認(rèn)真閱讀材料,不可遺漏要點(diǎn),并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容可知本文主要是一般過去時(shí)態(tài),注意時(shí)態(tài)語時(shí)間狀語的搭配及主謂一致問題。寫作中適當(dāng)使用連詞,注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密,符合邏輯關(guān)系。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】本篇書面表達(dá)要點(diǎn)全面,結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊,是一篇較好的范文。這篇短文使用了大量的短語,為文章增色不少,如: more and more people, 越來越多的人,F(xiàn)rankly speaking,坦白的說,more beautiful and more harmonious,越美麗,越和諧。還使用了定語從句和排比句Some cleaned the rooms, gardens and all the places which needed to be cleaned; some read newspapers and magazines to the old people; others talked happily with the lonely ones. 并列句We tried our best to show our love and care and we actually did it. 時(shí)間狀語從句When we helped others, we also get something more important等多種句式結(jié)構(gòu),增加了文章的可讀性。

考點(diǎn):考查提綱作文

 

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