Question

【題目】假如你叫李華，你和筆友Mike互寄了全家的合影。Mike看了合影后來信問為什么你沒有兄弟姐妹。請用英語寫封100字左右的回信說明情況。內(nèi)容包括以下幾點(diǎn)：

原因	1.二十世紀(jì)八十年代開始實(shí)行計(jì)劃生育； 2.大部分中國家庭是獨(dú)生子女。
看法	1.能受到好的教育；父母關(guān)愛更多； 2.孤獨(dú)、自私，生活能力差； 3.建議多交朋友。

注意：1.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)使行文連貫；

2.字?jǐn)?shù)100左右；

3.開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總字?jǐn)?shù)；

4.參考詞匯：計(jì)劃生育family program獨(dú)生子女the only child

Dear Mike,

Thank you for your letter and the photo of your family.

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Yours

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Mike,

Thank you for your letter and the photo of your family. Now I am writing to tell you why I am the only child in my family.

As you know, the population of China is growing very fast. In order to control the rapid increase of population, in the 1980s the government of China began to put into practice the family program---one child for each couple. As a result, most families have only one child. The child in the family can get more love from the family and chances to get better education. On the other hand, the only child is selfish, and not so independent. Sometimes they feel lonely. I think, every only child like me should learn to make more friends.

I hope that we write more often to each other.

Yours

Li Hua

【解析】第一步：認(rèn)真審題，提煉要點(diǎn) 一審格式：本文是書信體裁。二審結(jié)構(gòu)：按書信格式分為開頭、正文和結(jié)尾；正文應(yīng)包括目前存在的現(xiàn)象、原因和看法。三審要點(diǎn)：用英語思維，理出寫作要點(diǎn)。 1．grow very fast 2．control the rapid increase of population／control the birth rate 3．one child for each couple 4．get／receive／better education，get more love from the family 5．selfish／lonely／not independent／depend more on their parents 6．should make more friends

第二步：緊扣主題，擴(kuò)點(diǎn)成句

1．The population of China is growing very fast．

2．The government has begun to control the rapid increase of population．

3．A couple has only one child．

4．The child can get more love and more chances to get better education．

5．The only child is sometimes selfish，not so independent and feels lonely．

6．I hope every child should learn to make more friends．

第三步：補(bǔ)充修改，連句成篇。范文中用到連詞As you know, As a result, On the other hand, I think, 使行文更加連貫