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9．假設(shè)你是學(xué)生李華，得知好朋友William在學(xué)習(xí)中感到壓力很大，學(xué)習(xí)效果甚微，請你按照以下要點(diǎn)給他寫一封電子郵件，幫助他放松身心，提高學(xué)習(xí)效率．
1．快樂學(xué)習(xí)   2．課外活動    3．多交流
注意：1．詞數(shù)100左右，開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好（不記入總詞數(shù)），但不得抄入答題卡內(nèi)．
2．可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫．
Dear William，
Recently，I have heard that you feel stressed about study．I have a good mind to offer you some advice on how to study effectively．
First of all，learn in a relaxing way．This will remove our pressure，making study an easy job．Another way to keep up our spirits is to take part in sports．Not only does exercise build up the body，but also it provides us time to relax and fresh our mind，making us memorize things faster and longer．（高分句型二）Music，too，is another effective means of refreshing and helping us concentrate better．
Last but not least，we should exchange ideas with our classmates．Through the communication we can find support，which will encourage us to overcome difficulties in our study．（高分句型三）
I hope these can benefit you．
Yours
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 假設(shè)你是學(xué)生李華，得知好朋友William在學(xué)習(xí)中感到壓力很大，學(xué)習(xí)效果甚微，請你給他寫一封電子郵件，幫助他放松身心，提高學(xué)習(xí)效率．內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)：1．快樂學(xué)習(xí)，保持愉快的心情；2．積極參加體育活動，聽聽歌曲音樂；3．多與同學(xué)交流，互相鼓勵．
寫作時不要逐句翻譯，可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)以使行文連貫同時要把所提示的點(diǎn)寫全，語句通順，同時要注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時態(tài)、語態(tài)、上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系．根據(jù)句意適當(dāng)使用并列連詞，同時也要合理運(yùn)用高級詞匯和高級句子為文章增色添彩．注意：1．詞數(shù)100左右，開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)為你寫好；2．可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫．
【亮點(diǎn)說明】Recently，I have heard that you feel stressed about study．句中使用賓語從句；
Here is some advice on how to study effectively．疑問詞加動詞不定式在句中作介詞賓語；
Not only does exercise build up the body，but also it provides us time to relax and fresh our mind，making us memorize things faster and longer．Not only---，but also---引導(dǎo)部分倒裝，句中并且運(yùn)用了現(xiàn)在分詞作結(jié)果狀語；
Through the communication we can find support，which will encourage us to overcome difficulties in our study．非限制性定語從句出現(xiàn)在句中．

解答 Dear William，
     Recently，I have heard that you feel stressed about study．Here is some advice on how to study effectively．（高分句型一）
     First of all，learn in a relaxing way．This will remove our pressure，making study an easy job．Another way to keep up our spirits is to take part in sports．Not only does exercise build up the body，but also it provides us time to relax and fresh our mind，making us memorize things faster and longer．（高分句型二）Music，too，is another effective means of refreshing and helping us concentrate better．
     Last but not least，we should exchange ideas with our classmates．Through the communication we can find support，which will encourage us to overcome difficulties in our study．（高分句型三）
     I hope these can benefit you．
                                                                                                                                                                                                             Best wishes!
                                                                                                                                                                                                              Li Hua

點(diǎn)評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強(qiáng)的測試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運(yùn)用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．