假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個漏詞符號()，并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線(＼)劃掉。

修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線(___)，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1．每處錯誤及修改均僅限一詞；

2．只允許修改10處，多者(從第11處起)不計分。

Last Saturday I went to the library as usually. At about noon, I was enjoying my reading near a lake while suddenly I hear someone crying for help. I went up to see what was happened I was shocking to find a little child struggling in the water in the distance while many peoples were standing by without doing anything. Without any hesitation, I had pushed through the crowd as I took off my coat, but jumped into the water quickly. I managed to reach him and carried him back to safety. To his great relief, the kid was saved.

I was proud what I had done. I hope everyone can give a hand when someone else is in need.

為了幫助中學生健康成長，某中學英文報開辟了“HEART-TO-HEART”專欄。假設你是該欄目的編輯Jamie，收到一封署名為Worried的求助信。信中該同學向你訴說了自己的困擾：近日容易發(fā)脾氣，使正常的學習和生活受到了影響。請用英文給該同學寫一封回信。

內(nèi)容要點如下：

1．表示理解并給予安慰；

2．提出建議并說明理由。

注意：

1．詞數(shù)120左右；

2．信中不能出現(xiàn)與本人相關(guān)的信息；

3．信的開頭與結(jié)尾已為你擬好，不計入總詞數(shù)。

參考詞匯：temper n. 脾氣，情緒

Hi Worried.:

I’m sorry to know that you’re having such a bad time at the moment.

Yours,

Jamie

In order not to get into trouble, advertisers are increasingly cautious about taking out ads ______(aim) at children.

—You need to start exercising again, I guess.

—Well, I have been attempting ________ (eat) less recently. But as you know, my mother is such a good cook.

—Did he say anything that appealed ________ you especially?

—Not really. Actually I slept halfway through his speech.

It's typical ________ him to set his aim high but do little, so he is always leaving things undone.

________ coincidence, John and I were born on the same day of the same year, and we have a lot in common.

—Your sister nearly devoted all her spare time ________ her study during the three years.

—That's right, or she ________ (take) first place in her school in the College Entrance Examination.

—I heard that he grew worse after taking the medicine.

—Yes. He was allergic________ to it.

The young teacher wants to help his students as much as he can, but ________ the other hand, he'd better help them learn on their own.