假定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫(xiě)的以下作文。文中共有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一 個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加:在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)(∧) ,并在其下面寫(xiě)出該加的詞。

刪除:把多余的詞用斜線(xiàn)(\) 劃掉。

修改:在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線(xiàn)，并在該詞下面寫(xiě) 出修改后的詞。

注意：1. 每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

    2. 只充許修改10處，多者(從第11處起) 不計(jì)分。

    One day,my mother took me to a restaurant for a lunch. There was an old man,wearing an old army jacket,which obviously behaved strange. The waitress was not patient and insisted the man showed her his money after she took his order. When we were checking in,the old man was in front of us,paying his bill. My mother reached out and paid his bill. She told the waitress not judge a man by his clothes. Besides,she told the waitress everyone should show respects for the old. The waitress went red and making an apology to the old man. I was proud of my mother,who always told myself to do the right thing.

假定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫(xiě)的以下作文。文中共有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一 個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加:在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)(∧) ,并在其下面寫(xiě)出該加的詞。

刪除:把多余的詞用斜線(xiàn)(\) 劃掉。

修改:在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線(xiàn)，并在該詞下面寫(xiě) 出修改后的詞。

注意：1. 每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

    2. 只充許修改10處，多者(從第11處起) 不計(jì)分。

    I strongly believe that without a friend,world is a wasteland. Two years before,I had my ankle broken while played basketball. Therefore,I had no choices but to be out of school for a month. Fortunate,the whole time I have had many friends with me to help and support me. Most of us came to the end of my bed to encouraging me from time to time. To be honest,it was not until then when I realized the importance of friendship. I cannot thank everyone too much for their help and support. Without them,I won’t have got through the difficult time so smoothly.

假定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫(xiě)的以下作文。文中共有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一 個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加:在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)(∧) ,并在其下面寫(xiě)出該加的詞。

刪除:把多余的詞用斜線(xiàn)(\) 劃掉。

修改:在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線(xiàn)，并在該詞下面寫(xiě) 出修改后的詞。

注意：1. 每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

    2. 只充許修改10處，多者(從第11處起) 不計(jì)分。

     Wise and warm-hearted,Mr. Smith taught me the history when I was in Grade 7. I shall never forget how he told me personally one day. He said, “Always aim high than you believe you can reach. If not,you’ 11 discover that when your talents be set free by your imagination,you can achieve any goal. If people offer their helps or wisdom as you go through life,accepting it gratefully. You can learn many from those who have gone before you. However,don't be afraid step off the accepted path and head off in your own direction unless your heart tells you that it’s the right way for you."

假定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫(xiě)的以下作文。文中共有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一 個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加:在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)(∧) ,并在其下面寫(xiě)出該加的詞。

刪除:把多余的詞用斜線(xiàn)(\) 劃掉。

修改:在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線(xiàn)，并在該詞下面寫(xiě) 出修改后的詞。

注意：1. 每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

    2. 只充許修改10處，多者(從第11處起) 不計(jì)分。

   I strong recommend that physical activities in children are encouraged. Parents who are supposed to make sure that their children get some form of exercise one hour daily because exercise is better for character building. When this comes to exercise,many people end up picturing heavy exercise at the gym. As matter of fact,exercise for children can mean going out and having funs. For example,they can walk or cycle to nearby places instead of take a bus. They can take their dogs out for 15-minute walks twice a day.Beside,children should be encouraged to make new friends for whom they can actively play sports.

假定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫(xiě)的以下作文。文中共有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一 個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加:在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)(∧) ,并在其下面寫(xiě)出該加的詞。

刪除:把多余的詞用斜線(xiàn)(\) 劃掉。

修改:在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線(xiàn)，并在該詞下面寫(xiě) 出修改后的詞。

注意：1. 每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

    2. 只充許修改10處，多者(從第11處起) 不計(jì)分。

   If you can identify your personal values,your personal goals will not go wrongly. You must write your goals down on a piece of paper. If so,they will only become dreams. After you know your personal values,find out that you really want to achieve in life. Life had many aspects and in order to lead happy life,you should set a goal in every aspect.Nothing which happens just by accidents. Take a look for all of the things that are kept you from accomplishing your goal and develop a plan to overcome them. You also need to find out the people or group you need to work with to reaching your goals.

假定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫(xiě)的以下作文。文中共有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一 個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加:在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)(∧) ,并在其下面寫(xiě)出該加的詞。

刪除:把多余的詞用斜線(xiàn)(\) 劃掉。

修改:在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線(xiàn)，并在該詞下面寫(xiě) 出修改后的詞。

注意：1. 每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

    2. 只充許修改10處，多者(從第11處起) 不計(jì)分。

   Of all the outdoor activity,I like climbing most,especially in late autumn when the sun hangs highly in the sky. Yesterday afternoon,our friends and I put on our sports shoes so off we went. Half an hour later,we reached on the top of the hill near our school,which we enjoyed a wonderful view. To the south,a big river cross the city lies in the sunlight. Near the river is our school,which is like beautifully designed garden. When the sun started to go down,we went back. On the way back,we meet many other students who were talking and laughing all the way. Obviously,we both had a good time that afternoon.

假定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫(xiě)的以下作文。文中共有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一 個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加:在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)(∧) ,并在其下面寫(xiě)出該加的詞。

刪除:把多余的詞用斜線(xiàn)(\) 劃掉。

修改:在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線(xiàn)，并在該詞下面寫(xiě) 出修改后的詞。

注意：1. 每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

    2. 只充許修改10處，多者(從第11處起) 不計(jì)分。

    This morning my classmate John was late for class. It was the fifth time that he have been late for class in a week,what made the teacher angry. After the school,I had a talk with John. I said, “It is good manners to be on time for all of your scheduled event. Being on time show you have respect for other people and that you care so much about their time as your own. In fact,all success people,view their time as a precious resource. Valuing others’ time and earning your respect is an important part of your individual reputation." Heard what I said,John made up his mind to be late again.

假定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫(xiě)的以下作文。文中共有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一 個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加:在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)(∧) ,并在其下面寫(xiě)出該加的詞。

刪除:把多余的詞用斜線(xiàn)(\) 劃掉。

修改:在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線(xiàn)，并在該詞下面寫(xiě) 出修改后的詞。

注意：1. 每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

    2. 只充許修改10處，多者(從第11處起) 不計(jì)分。

   My friend Linda and I have set up small organization called Delivering Smiles with my mother. Linda and I do all of the work like collect toys and picture books. Before a month of collecting these things,my mother takes us to the hospital that she works as a nurse. When we take what we had collected to the hospital,my mother brings us to differently children's rooms. We let each child pick out of what they want. We sit in each room for about ten minute,talking to and playing with each child. When I give a little of my time for children in the hospital and when I see their smiles,we feel quite happy.

假定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫(xiě)的以下作文。文中共有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一 個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加:在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)(∧) ,并在其下面寫(xiě)出該加的詞。

刪除:把多余的詞用斜線(xiàn)(\) 劃掉。

修改:在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線(xiàn)，并在該詞下面寫(xiě) 出修改后的詞。

注意：1. 每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

    2. 只充許修改10處，多者(從第11處起) 不計(jì)分。

   John has been lived next door to me for years and has left a real impression on me. Disabled as he is,but he is really a man who is full of positive energy. John always appreciates life and inspires me to be a best that I can be. He uses his mind to learn daily and had independence despite our unfavorable situation. Every time I with him,I feel as if the impossible can be achieved if I just believe on myself. John loves life and doesn’t spend any time feel sorry for himself. I am lucky to have so good a neighbor which can pick me up and inspire me when I am in lower spirits.

增加:在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)(∧) ,并在其下面寫(xiě)出該加的詞。

刪除:把多余的詞用斜線(xiàn)(\) 劃掉。

修改:在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線(xiàn)，并在該詞下面寫(xiě) 出修改后的詞。

注意：1. 每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

    2. 只充許修改10處，多者(從第11處起) 不計(jì)分。

  Like a movie lover,I used to stay home watching TV during the summer holidays. After doing my homework,I always spend too much time in front of the TV set. Unless my parents encouraged me go outside and get some fresh air,I didn't listen to them. The summer holiday is coming and all I want to do are lie on the couch and watch TV as usually. However,V ve been told the park in our area will offer free movies the whole family can watch them soon. The news which we can watch movies under the star really makes us happy. After all,we can watch some movies together with our family while enjoyed the fresh air.