假段定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號()，并在其下面寫出該加的詞。刪除：把多余的詞用(＼)劃掉。

修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下畫一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1．每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。

It is common for students to find part-time job．Last summer holiday, I had once worked as a waiter at a restaurant．At first I couldn’t stand the hard work．．But with time goes b[]y, I came to realize that I did the meaningful thing．First, I made some money, what allowed me to buy birthday gifts for my friends with asking my parents for money．But I began to learn about the value of money．Besides, I also learned how to get along with other．In a word, the part-time job at the restaurants was great and I got some valuably work experience from it．

書面表達(dá).

假定你是王芳，你校下個(gè)月要舉行校園音樂節(jié)，你將通過電子郵件告訴遠(yuǎn)在美國的朋友Mary, 要點(diǎn)如下：1．時(shí)間：4月7日 開幕式。2．目的：豐富同學(xué)們的課余文化生活，展示自我，放松心情。3．主題：音樂讓我們歡笑。4．內(nèi)容：音樂短劇，歌詠比賽，器樂比賽等。

詞數(shù)：100左右。

Dear Mary,

閱讀下列短文，從每題所給的四個(gè)選項(xiàng)（A、B、C、D）中，選出最佳選項(xiàng)。

It’s a time when school，homework，active social lives and pare-time jobs keep teenagers busy from early in the morning until late at night．They are likely to try to make up for a lack of sleep by “sleeping in” on the weekends．Unfortunately，this causes irregular sleep and actually makes the problem worse．

Most teenagers are not able to fall asleep until late at night．Since many teens aren’t sleepy until around 11 pm．but need to be at school by 7:30 or 8:00 am ．They cannot get enough sleep ．During puberty(青春期)，the biological clock in the brain naturally re-sets to a later time ，and this causes teens to fall asleep later．Then ，when it’s time to get up ，a teen’s body clock is likely to still be producing the night-time hormones ．This makes it hard for them to feel active and energetic in the morning．

A growing body of research suggests that starting high school later improves attendance，achievements and grades．A few years ago in an important study ，test scores on the SAT college entrance exams in Edina，Minnesota jumped more than 100 points on average，when the morning school bell rang an hour later．Unfortunately，most schools are not set up to start later and fail to satisfy teen’s sleep needs．

1.What effect does “sleeping in” on the weekends have on teenagers?

A．Improving their health

B．Weakening their energy

C．Disturbing their biological clock

D．Making up for their hormone loss

2.The study in Minnesota shows that starting morning school one hour later helps to______．

A．make teenagers grow faster

B．change teenagers’ sleep needs

C．do more research on teenagers

D．improve students’ achievements

3.The text helps us to know more about teenagers’______．

A．daytime activities B．sleeping habits

C．mental problems D．studying methods

閱讀理解。

Chicago’s children’s Hospital is the lucky receiver of a surprise $18million gift from Gladys Holm．She once was a secretary who never earned more than $15000 a year and never married．She lived alone in a small flat in Chicago，and was a volunteer at the Children’s Hospital．She was called the “Teddy Bear lady” because she brought toy animals to sick children on her regular visits．But Miss Holm，who died in 1996 at the age of 86 ，was also a long-time buyer of stocks(股票)．Over the years，she saved money that rose up to $18 million ，which she left to the Children’s Hospital ．It was the largest single donation in the hospital’s 115-year history．The hospital president，Jan Jennings，was shocked when she heard the news “when Miss Holm’s lawyer called to tell me how much that money was，I asked him to repeat it ，since I was certain I had misheard．”

Why did Gladys Holm fell so strongly about the Children’s Hospital? Jennings said the hospital first touched Miss Holm’s heart nearly 50 years ago，when doctors there saved the life of her friend’s daughter．She never forgot the happiness she felt all those years ago．

Holm’s gift will be devoted to heart disease research．People at the hospital said they regretted that they couldn’t thank Miss Holm for the surprising gift．

1.According to the text ，Miss Holm built up her fortune by_______．

A．playing Teddy Bear Lady

B．working as a secretary

C．helping in the hospital

D．buying stocks

2.Why did Jan Jennings ask the lawyer to repeat what he said?

A．she never expected Miss Holm would donate anything．

B．she want to make sure who Gladys Holm was

C．she had seldom received donations before

D．she thought there was a mistake

3.Miss Holm’s love for the Children’s Hospital grew from_______．

A．a(chǎn) happy life living with children

B．a(chǎn) satisfying job given by the hospital

C．a(chǎn)n unforgettable experience many years ago

D．a(chǎn) valuable gift she received from the hospital

4.How will the donated money be used?

A．To built up a new children’s hospital

B．To help sick children and their parents

C．To improve research on heart disease

D．To buy more toys for sick children

閱讀理解。

We feel it important to start reading to your child right from the start –the younger the better! With little ones(children from birth to 4)it is very important to read and reread books．Starting early makes the job of the listener(for you will be teaching your child how to listen) easier，as it helps to develop an early love of the written and spoken word．

We believe that you should read aloud to your child at least once every day ．Set a special reading time during the day or evening when you can settle down（安靜下來） and enjoy a book，without interruption．For most families，reading aloud at bedtime is a common practice．

We understand that it can be quite discouraging to read to a child who takes no interest ．Take heart! Learning to listen takes experience ．The more you read ，the more your child will learn to sit for a story ．Children have a natural development of responses(反應(yīng))to your reading ．By the time your child reaches6-7 months，she/he is attracted by the book in your hand ，and would like to test it out by using it as a chew(咀嚼)toy．This is natural! By one year，your child is learning to listen and talk about the pages，often shouting out things she/he recognizes．Encourage this! And at the onset (起始)of walking ，you have your biggest challenge yet．your child is always on the go．you need to set your reading time for a time in the day when your child is preparing to settle down．This means bedtime．Remember，it is your right and duty to teach your child about the power of books．Of course ，it doesn’t happen overnight，but the returns are great!

1.Who does “the listener” in the first paragraph refer to?

A．The writer B．The parent

C．The child D．The teacher

2.The best time of the day to read stories to a child is ______．

A．when the child is still active in the early evening

B．when the parents finish the day’s housework

C．when the child has a chew toy to play with

D．when the child is quiet and peaceful

3.Parent may find it most difficult to read to their child when she/he _______．

A．is 6-7 months old B．is one year old

C．start to walk D．start to talk

閱讀理解。

People travel for a lot of reasons．Some travelers go to see battlefields or religious shrines．Others are looking for culture，or simply want to have their photos taken in front of famous places．But most Europeans are willing to pay a lot of money and put up with a lot of inconveniences for the sun because they have so little of it．Residents of cities like London，Copenhagen，and Amsterdam spend a lot of their winter in the dark because the days are so short and much of the rest of the year is in the rain．Every summer，more than 25 million people travel to Mediterranean (地中海) resorts and beaches for their vacation．They all come for the same reason: sun．

The huge crowds mean lots of money for the economies of Mediterranean countries．Italy's 30，000 hotels are booked every summer．And 13 million people camp out on French Beaches，parks，and roadsides．Spain's long sandy coastline attracts more people than anywhere else．37 million tourists visit yearly，or one tourist for every person living in Spain．

But there are signs that the area is getting more tourism than it can handle．The Mediterranean is already one of the most polluted seas on earth．And with increased tourism，it's getting worse．The French can't figure out what to do with all the garbage left by campers around St．Tropez．And in many places，swimming is dangerous because of pollution．

None of this，however，is damaging anyone's fun．The Mediterranean gets more popular every year with tourists．Obviously，they don't go there for clean water．They stand traffic jams and seem to like crowded beaches．They don't even mind the pollution．No matter how dirty the water is，the coastline still looks beautiful．And as long as the sun shines，it's still better than sitting in the cold rain in Berlin，London，or else．

1.It can be inferred from the passage that Europeans travel mostly for the reason that ______．

A．they want to see battlefields or religious shrines．

B．they are interested in different cultures．

C．they would like to take pictures in front of famous sites．

D．they wish to escape from the cold，dark and rainy days back at home．

2.In Para．1，cities like London，Copenhagen，and Amsterdam are mentioned to show that ______．

A．they are not good cities in climate．

B．how rich their residents are．

C．these cities lack places of historic interest and tourist spots．

D．they have got more tourism than they can handle．

3.According to the passage，which of the following countries attracts more tourists than the others?

A．Italy B．Spain

C．France D．Greece

4.The sentence "one tourist for every person living in Spain" (Para．2 ) means ____．

A．every year the number of tourists is equal to the number of people living in Spain．

B．a(chǎn)ll the 37 million people living in Spain are tourists．

C．every person living in Spain has to take care of a tourist．

D．every Spanish is visited by a tourist every year．

5.Which of the following will damage the tourists' fun at Mediterranean resorts and beaches?

A．Polluted water． B．Crowded buses．

C．Traffic jams． D．Rainy weather

根據(jù)短文內(nèi)容，從短文后的選項(xiàng)中選出能填入空白處的最佳選項(xiàng)。選項(xiàng)中有兩項(xiàng)為多余選項(xiàng)。

There are few people who draw up life goals．Most people want to take one step at a time and are frightened when they have to set life goals 1.

They can’t be more wrong ．Life goals are only a road map ．They record what you want to be at the end of your life．2.others may want to be known as great builders or great sports people．In fact，there is no end to what to be．

However，the only way you can achieve your dream is by writing down your goal ．Once you have done that，you need to break this goal into several small goals．While writing the small goals，you must provide for change．3.if you want to achieve your goals，you should be prepared to change them from time to time．This makes your goals really up-to-date．

Also，there cannot be just one life goal ．There are at least five subjects that you need to address ．There are: education ，career (職業(yè))，family，health and money．4. For example，there can be no career goals unless they are backed by education goals．Similarly，there can be no family goals unless they are based on practical financial goals．

None of these goals is taught in college ．Yes，there are some families that try to train their kids to think wisely，and plan for their life ．5._They know what they want to get in life．They are also mentally prepared for most of the difficulties they expect to meet on the way．

A．These are happy families

B．Good health helps you to realize your goals．

C．Nothing remains unchanged in this world．

D．Many people do not know how to set life goals．

E．To them，life is too big to reduce to a few goals．

F．you will find that all these goals are related．

G．Some may want to be known as great scientists．

閱讀下面短文，從短文后各題所給的四個(gè)選項(xiàng)（A，B，C和D）中，選出可以填入空白處的最佳選項(xiàng)，并在答題卡上將該項(xiàng)涂黑。

I became interested in writing at an early age ．So when my fourth-grade teacher told me about a _____ writer’s conference where students of my age could _____ published writers，I decided to go．I began thinking about the writers whose stories I _____ –Judy Blume，Beverly Cleary，Shell Silverstein and _____ if they would be at this conference．

Well，I went to the conference，but I was a little _____．None of them were there．But the conference was well _____，and every half hour we would move on to hear a new writer speak．Soon the _____ period of the day came．A man introduced himself and gave the same little speech we had heard since that morning．_____，he threw in a twist(轉(zhuǎn)折)。

“_____ are more than just words thrown together，” he said．“Words are more than just_____ thrown together．You must also_____ the mood or the tone(語氣)of your ideas．”

He let that idea sink in(領(lǐng)會) and then_____ us about the difference between a house and a home．We all thought that was a_____ question，and made some wild guesses at it．“Class”，he _____ ，”the difference between a house and a home is in the mood or the tone ．A house is the_____---the wood，the bricks，the lighting ，the refrigerator．A home is the love and warmth and comfort you _____ as you walk through the_____．”I’ve kept that_____in my memory ever since that day．Writing is more than just filling up a blank page with _____;it’s about expressing your ideas with clarity(清晰) and the mood ．And that’s why I _____ it．

1.A．famous B．new C．report D．school

2.A．become B．recognize C．meet D．fellow

3.A wrote B．loved C．believed D．changed

4.A．cared B．doubted C．imagined D．wondered

5.A．disappointed B．confused C．surprised D．worried

6.A．a(chǎn)ttended B．organized C．informed D．equipped

7.A ．happy B．late C ．busy D．last

8.A．Anyhow B．Again C．Then D．Therefore

9.A．stories B．Lessons C．lectures D．languages

10.A．sounds B．letters C．spellings D．meanings

11.A．enjoy B．separate C．consider D．notice

12.A．warned B．taught C．told D．a(chǎn)sked

13.A．silly B．difficult C．familiar D．serious

14.A．a(chǎn)greed B．suggested C．explained D．a(chǎn)ttempted

15.A．design B．fortune C．mood D．building

16.A．lack B．feel C．give D．need

17.A．house B．yard C．hall D．door

18.A．expression B．statement C．standard D．rule

19.A．words B．facts C．numbers D．ideas

20.A．like B．understand C．suggest D．stress

閱讀下面材料，在空白處填入適當(dāng)?shù)膬?nèi)容或括號內(nèi)單詞的正確形式。

1.One of Barcelona’s most famous landmarks is the church of the Sagrada Familia，which______ (design) by an architect called Antonio Gaudi．

2.Their work (influence) other writers ever since．

3.Paris is the capital and largest city of France， ( situation) on the River Seine．

4.The United Kingdom is the northwest coast of continental Europe．

5.Norway is at the top of the list， the US is at number 7．

6.The report shows that we are making some progress that we need to make greater efforts．

7.In the last ten years in China，150million people moved out of poverty． ，the challenges are still great．

8.Although (develop) countries give some financial help，they need to give much more．

9.The earth is forty-nine times (large) than the moon．

10.Berners-Lee made it possible for everyone to use Internet，not just the army．

文中有10處語言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯(cuò)誤涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。請?jiān)谟绣e(cuò)誤的地方增加、刪除或修改某個(gè)單詞。

增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（﹨）劃掉。

修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：

1．每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。

I’d like to say anything about the service in our school dining hall．In general，the service is satisfied．The hall is clean and tidy．And dishes look inviting and tastes good．What’s more，the workers there treat us as their friends，which makes us real happy．However，the cost of the meals was a little high．Also，we have only a limited variety of dish which are the same every day．In addition，we often have to stand with line for a long time after we get our food．This wastes a lot of time．I hope something can be done to solve about these problems soon．