短文改錯(cuò)

假定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫(xiě)的以下作文。文中共有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處，每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：把缺詞處加個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（∧），并在其下面寫(xiě)出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線(xiàn)（\）劃掉。

修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線(xiàn)，并在該詞下面寫(xiě)出修改后的詞。

注意：1每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；2只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。

It isn’t hard to grow up into a responsible members of society. I can well remember an incident that happens on a rainy Sunday afternoon. I was on my way to the bookstore and was waiting the green light at a crossing when a girl about ten was knocked on by a passing car, it drove off quickly. A man immediately rushed to a girl to give her first aid and I joined in without hesitation. Luckily she was not badly injured but we sent her to the nearest hospital. Comparing with the escaped driver, I am proud of what I did.

As a member of the society, I am convinced of that being responsible is that it takes to make a better society.

假定你是李華，在校報(bào)看到了一則招聘啟事，請(qǐng)閱讀啟事，并根據(jù)寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)寫(xiě)一封應(yīng)聘郵件。

寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)：1. 表明寫(xiě)信意圖；2. 陳述應(yīng)聘目的；3. 說(shuō)明應(yīng)聘條件（英語(yǔ)好、能熟練操作電腦、有奉獻(xiàn)精神和服務(wù)意識(shí)等）。

要求：內(nèi)容向上，語(yǔ)意連貫，結(jié)構(gòu)完整,書(shū)寫(xiě)工整，字?jǐn)?shù)100左右。

Dear Ms. Chen,

I’m Li Hua, a student from Class 21, Grade 2. _______________________________

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Yours,

Li Hua

She brought with her three friends, none of ________ I had ever met before.

A. themB. whoC. whomD. these

He gave us a lot of help when we were in trouble, but we have nothing to give him ________.

A. in dangerC. in needC. in returnD. in fact

The thought of going back home was ________ kept him happy while he was working abroad.

A．thatB．a(chǎn)ll thatC．a(chǎn)ll whatD．which

Even though we have made much progress in preventing pollution, yet much ________.

A. is remained to doB. remains being done

C. remains to be doneD. is remained to be done

Eric received training in computer for one year, ________ he found a job in a big company.

A. after thatB. after whichC. after itD. after this

The year 1949 ________ the birth of a new country — the People’s Republic of China.

A. happenedB. gaveC. hadD. saw

To get evidence of the murder, the police ________ the whole house ________.

A. made, search forB. had, searched

C. made, searched forD. had, searching

We went through a period ________ communications were very difficult in the rural areas.

A. whichB. whoseC. in whichD. with which