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增加:在缺詞處加一個漏子符號(∧)并在其下面寫出該加的詞.
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The first day we go to high school,our head teacher told us the news which we needed to take the military training.We were all shocking at the news,because of it was so hot outside.How terribly it was!The next day,we met our training instructor,who were young and handsome.He was strict,but humorous,telling him jokes when we rested.At night,he asked us to sing military songs.We even competed with other teams.The days of the military trainings were beautiful,and we found a training was not that hard.We became stronger and made friends to our military instructor.