7.假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文,請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文.文中
共有10處語言錯誤,每句中最多有兩處.每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改.
增加:在缺詞處加一個漏字符號(/\),并在其下面寫出該加的詞.
刪除:把多余的詞用斜線(\)劃掉.
修改:在錯的詞下劃一橫線,并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞.
注意:1.每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞;
2.只允許修改10處,多者(從第11處起)不計分.
People listen to music for different reason.Why is music so important to many people?For one thing,music can help people feel relaxing and sometimes it is even the medicine for a broken heart.For other,music joins people together because the power of its truth and beauty.
Many adults enjoyed classical music.A Beethoven symphony may bring them out a peaceful mind,give them a chance to keep away from the busy world.As for me,I appreciate both classical music or pop music.That is why the former can help me to reduce the pressure from study and life,while the later can make my life colorful and interesting.