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Hiking has become popular in China during recent years, and more and more people become
hikers, who are calling Donkey Friends(驢友)in Chinese.A discussion about hiking has held in our
class.Some students think that hiking during vacations can make people to feel healthier, fresher and
more harmonious with nature.They find themselves deep attracted by the beauty of nature.They can
also be relaxing walking in deep mountains. But nowadays some hikers even begin to explore the
places people have never been to, and accidents have been happened now and then because poor
knowledge of hiking.Some hikers even lost their life.The other students in our class think it not safe
to organize so dangerous activities.They make suggestions which laws should be passed and hikers
should be trained before they attend the activities.
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