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    增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏詞符號(hào)(^)，并在此符號(hào)下面寫出該加的詞。

    刪除：把多余的詞用斜線(＼)劃掉。

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    注意：1.每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

       2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。

It was my 18th birthday yesterday. As the age is special for our teenagers, so my parents held a birthday party for me at home. With my parents and some of my good friends attend my birthday party, I really had unforgettable experience. We sang songs, dancing and played games together. We all enjoy ourselves very much. During the party, my parent told me that from then on I was no longer a child and an adult. They also said I should be more independent and responsibly. Hearing their words. I was greatly encouraged. It was just at that moment when I felt I was a grown-up.

So it is exam time once again! Everyone, whether a kid or an adult, has at least a little bit of pressure of exams, and it is just that some show it while others do not. So the most important tip is to relax and not take too much stress.   51  Here are some study tips for high school students as well as study tips for college students.

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The most common mistake that students make is that they start studying a day or two before exams! No portion can be covered, not even halfway, if you study only two days before exams. So what most of the students do, is study only the so-called important points. As a result, even if the paper is easy, you get a low score only because you didn't know the entire contents!   53  If time does not perait you to learn your lessons, at least go through them regularly. This way you will be familiar with the syllabus and won't find it difficult to understand then at the last minute.

       ·Follow effective techniques

There are some easy techniques to study well, like read the lesson casually, at least twice. And while reading, mark the important points with a pencil and move on.   54  Before going to exams, read only the underlined points. This is one of the last minute study tips for exams.

·Relaxation techniques

Don’t study continuously instead of taking some breaks. Just go for minimum 5 minutes to maximum 8 minutes breaks needed an hour in your studies.  55  During an exam, use the few minutes before you are allowed to begin to do some simple relaxation and breathingexercises, sit back and separate yourself mentally from those who are getting anxious.

A．Study beforehand

B．Prepare a good timetable

C．So start studying at least a month before the exams.

D．It will make your mind fresh and active, then you will find interest in studying.

E．Revising for exams is about more than just reading through the notes you made in class.

F．But a little bit of pressure is always necessary, as it is good for us and helps us perform well.

G．When you start reading for the second time, read those underlined points first and then the rest of the text.

Human demands on natural resources have doubled in less than 50 years and are now outstripping(超過) what the Earth can provide by more than half, a new report has warned. If this situation continues, globablly it will need the capacity of two Earths by 2030, the Living Planet Report said. And the report, from the World Wide Fund For Nature, the Zoological Society of London and the Global Footprint Network, said British people are still consuming（消費(fèi)、消耗） far more than the Earth can offer..

Wildlife in tropical countries is also under huge pressure, with populations of species falling by 60 percent in three decades. The study’s authors looked at 8,000 populations of 2,500 species and studied the change in land use and water consumption across the globe. Warned that if everyone are now living lifestyles which would  require one and a half planets to support their lives, though there are signiflcant differences between rich and poor nations.

The UK comes 31st in a list of countries based on their “ecological footprint” — the amount of land and sea each person needs to provide the food, clothes and other products they consume and to absorb the carbon dioxide they give off. The country has fallen down the league table from having the 15th biggest footprint in the last report two years ago, but the World Wide Fund For Nature points out this is due to an increase in other countries’ impact rather than a reduction in the UK’s use of resources. Ireland has the 10th highest ecological footprint in the world, while the United Arab Emirates, Qatar, Denmark, Belgium and the USA are the five worst countries for over-consumption of resources.

It also carried a warning about the loss of wildlife and ecosystems which people depend on for food, fuel, clean water and other resources — with populations of species declining by 30 percent worldwide between 1970 and 2007.

48．In this text the author wants to tell us           .

       A．humans are overusing the planet

       B．e need two earths to live on by 2030

       C．differences between rich and poor nations

       D．wildlife on earth is under huge pressure

49．According to the text, what has happened worldwide in the last three decades and seven years? A．Populations of species have fallen by 60 percent.

       B．Human demands on natural resources have doubled.

       C．Populations of species have declined by 30 percent.

       D．Our lifestyles have used up 1.5 planets’ resources.

50．From the third paragraph we know           .

       A．the UK’s sudation is no better than that of Ireland

       B．the UK is now in its 15th position in the league table

       C．the UK has reduced its consumption of natural resources

       D．other countries are increasing their consumption of natural resoures

Dear Parents of the Class of 2015.

On behalf of the University, we would like to invite you to attend Freshman Parents Weekend, which will take place Friday-Sunday, Oct. 14-16, 2011.

Freshman Parents Weekend is designed to introduce you to some of the most important aspects of undergraduate life at Princeton. Panel discussions, lectures and presentations will provide you with opportunities to hear from and ask questions of administrators（管理者）, staff and cllege students who are familiar with the academic, campus life and residential（住校）experiences of our newest students. Open houses, tours, presentations, and cultural and athletic events will allow you to experience many of the activities Princeton students value and enjoy.

Just as important as the formal program is the opportunity for your sons and daughters to share their excitement about their lives as they spend time with you, introduce you to their friends and show you around the campus.

Please use the online registration form to let us know whether you will be able to come to Princeton for Freshman Parents Weekend. If you prefer to print the form to fill out, please submit the completed form no later than Wednesday, Oct. 5.

Should you have questions or want further information, please contact Lucy Weise at the Office of Conference and Event Services at (609) 258-1741, or email lweise@princeton.edu.

       We do hope you will be able to join us, and we look forward to meeting you.

Sincerely,

Valerie Smith, Dean of the College

Cynthia Cherrey, Vice President for Campus Life

44．Where can you possibly read this text?

       A．In a newspaper.                                   B．On a web page.

       C．In a textbook.                                      D．In a magazine.

45．The purpose of the writer is to         .

       A．tell how to use the online registration from

       B．a(chǎn)nnounce a weekend event for freshmen and a formal inhibition

       C．introduce some useful information about the life at Princeton

       D．invite freshmen’s parents to attend Freshman Parents Weekend

46．After filling out the printed form, what should the parents do?

       A．Present it on time.                                                               B．Contact Lucy Weise

       C．Write a letter to their children.               D．Obey the rules of the activities.

47．The activities in Freshman Parents Weekend can’t be learned through         .

       A．contacting Lucy Weise at (609) 258-1741

       B．reading Paragraph 4 and Paragraph 6

       C．reading Paragraph 2 and Paragraph 3

       D．emailing lweise@princeton.cdu

Bungee jump is the art of tying a very large rubber band to your ankles, then jump off a perfectly good bridge or other high obstacle（障礙物）. Bungee Jumping is an extreme sport that not everyone has the heart to do, but allegedly（據(jù)說）, once you do your first bungee jump, you are hooked and want to do it all over again, and from different places.

The idea of bungee jump came from an ancient ceremony held on an island in the Pacific. The legend goes like this, a man was arguing fiercely with his wife, and she ran away from him and into the forest. She climbed a Banyan tree and wrapped her ankles with vines（藤）, to save herself in case she fell off. Her husband eventually found her, and climbed the same tree to make peace with this wife. But, the woman jumped from the tree to get away, and he jumped after her immediately to save her. So she bounced back up and he hit the ground very hard and died. This legend is said to start the coming of age ceremony practiced on the island, where young men about to enter adulthood, would tie the vines to their ankles, and jump off tall trees of little cliffs. If the young men lived after they had jumped, they would be recognized as men. If  they got ready and at the last minute would not do the jump, they were forever recognized as boys and hardly ever married.

In the modern world, bungee jumping started, again allegedly, on April Fools day,1979. A group from Oxford University, England, calling themselves "The Dangerous Sports Club" used nylon rubber to conduct an improvised（即興的）bungee jump, and four of them jumped for the first time. The his the world press headlines, and a new extreme sport has been born.

40．The woman ran into the forest because she             .

       A．wanted to pick some fruits

       B．wanted to ask for help

       C．had quarreled with her husband

       D．had been cheated by her hysband

41．The young living on the island in the Pactfic jumped off tall trees to           .

       A．enjoy themselves                                 B．build up their bodies

       C．show off their bravery                         D．prove their being adults

42．Which of the following statements is NOT true?

       A．The Pacific is home to modern bungee jump.

       B．Modern bungee jump began on April  1, 1979

       C．Islanders who didn’t dare to do bungee jump could hardly marry.

       D．The first modern bungee jump was widely reported in newspapers.

43．What does the passage mainly talk about?

       A．The function of bungee jump.               B．An exciting sport, bungee jump.

       C．Preparations for bungee jump.               D．How bungee jump became popular.

I owe my father a huge thank you! Sure, I need to thank him for all those years of paying my bills, fixing my bikes, and providing a shoulder to cry on. But this year I realized that his contributions to my childhood were much more than that.

I grew up as Daddy’s Little Girl. If I had a problem that needed fixing or a question that needed answering, he was the one I ran to. He counseled me through everything from math homework as a high school student to career choices as a young adult. He always expected that I do my best in whatever I did, and he believed I could succeed in anything I put my mind to. As a result, I learned to hold myself to those same standards. He always showed me unconditional love, which helped me learn to love myself. It was something I’d taken for granted until I realized from talking with my friends that they had no similar view of their self worth. Having fathers that didn’t believe in them left them to grow up not believing in themselves.

As I was growing up, my father also modeled how a woman should be lavished. He lavished my mom with love and respect. As a result, I grew to expect nothing less than that from the men I dated and from the man I would eventually marry. Dad was a living picture of godliness（虔誠）, honesty and responsibility. It was only recently that I realized what a deep effect fathers have on their daughter’s lives. That is why I want to thank my dad for the godly example of love that he has been to me throughout my life.

36．From the second paragraph, the author thinks it she most valuable that           .

       A．her father was very strict with her

       B．her father helped her a lot in every way

       C．nothing was difficult if her father was on her side

       D．Father’s trust deeply influenced her self-confidence

37．What does the underlined word “l(fā)avished” in Paragraph 3 probably mean?

       A．Loved.                B．Respected.           C．Treated.              D．Spoiled.

38．Who would the author turn to when in trouble?

       A．He friends.          B．Her mother.         C．Her husband.       D．Her father.

39．The feeling the author wants to express to her father in this text is           .

       A．grateful               B．impressive           C．proud                  D．pitiful

Lily was heading down the sidewalk towards her subway stop in Washington. She had a lot to do at work. But as she hurried down the 16 , she started to feel warm. By the time she 　17 to the platform. Lily felt sick – maybe it hadn’t been a 　18 idea to give blood the night before, she thought. She leaned 19 against a post close to the tracks.

Several metres away, John and his girlfriend Mary, found a 　20 close to where the front of the train would stop. Suddenly he 21 the scream, followed by someone yelling. “Oh, my God she 22 in!” John didn’t hesitate. Taking off and 23 the bag to his friend, he 24 down to the tracks and ran some 12 metres towards the body lying facedown on the 　25 . By the time John reached Lily, he could “ 26 vibration（震動(dòng)）on the tracks and see the light 27 the tunnel,” he remembers. “The train was maybe 20 seconds from the station.”

28 ,a former high school wrestler who trains t a gym to stay in shape, 29 Lily under her ampits ,(腋窩). She was deadweight. “It was 　30 to lift her. She was just our,” he says. But he managed to raise her 1.2 meters to the 　31 so that by standers could grab her arms and drag her away from the edge. As the train closed in, John had to 32 himself onto the platform. He did so just seconds before the t rain passed by him and came to a stop.

When Lily woke up again, she felt herself being 33 along the ground, and saw someone else around her. Police and fire officials soon arrived and Lily 34 a scries of operations on her face 35 fortunately she didn’t lose her life.

16．A．stairs　　　　　　　　 B．windows　　　　　　 C．platform　　　　　　 D．exit

17．A．moved　　　　　　　 B．a(chǎn)rrived　　　　　　　 C．got　　　　　　　　　　 D．reached

18．A．had　　　　　　　　　　 B．good　　　　　　　　　 C．common　　　　　　 D．special

19．A．easily　　　　　　　　 B．stably　　　　　　　　 C．delightedly　　　　　 D．heavily

20．A．spot　　　　　　　　　 B．poster　　　　　　　　 C．door　　　　　　　　　 D．restroom

21．A．learned　　　　　　　 B．noticed　　　　　　　 C．heard　　　　　　　　 D．saw

22．A．ran　　　　　　　　　　 B．looked　　　　　　　　 C．took　　　　　　　　　 D．feel

23．A．receiving　　　　　　 B．throwing　　　　　　 C．breaking　　　　　　 D．losing

24．A．jumped　　　　　　　 B．walked　　　　　　　 C．went　　　　　　　　　 D．sat

25．A．paths　　　　　　　　 B．tracks　　　　　　　　 C．trains　　　　　　　　 D．seats

26．A．change　　　　　　　 B．watch　　　　　　　　 C．feel　　　　　　　　　　 D．realize

27．A．going into　　　　　 B．making into　　　　 C．pulling into　　　 D．coming into

28．A．Lily　　　　　　　　　　 B．Joe　　　　　　　　　　 C．Mary　　　　　　　　 D．John

29．A．grabbed　　　　　　　 B．pushed　　　　　　　 C．woke　　　　　　　　 D．called

30．A．hard　　　　　　　　　 B．easy　　　　　　　　　 C．timely　　　　　　　　 D．possible

31．A．train　　　　　　　　　 B．platform　　　　　　 C．station　　　　　　　　 D．shop

32．A．take　　　　　　　　　 B．convince　　　　　　 C．tell　　　　　　　　　　 D．lift

33．A．beaten　　　　　　　　 B．stolen　　　　　　　　 C．pulled　　　　　　　　 D．worried

34．A．needed　　　　　　　 B．required　　　　　　　 C．a(chǎn)sked　　　　　　　　 D．ordered

35．A．a(chǎn)nd　　　　　　　　　　 B．or　　　　　　　　　　　 C．but　　　　　　　　　　 D．so

Recently the south of the country has been worst         by the drought.

       A．impressed            B．a(chǎn)ffected               C．expressed            D．designed

So many trees         in the past few years, which makes the city more attractive.

       A．were planted        B．have planted         C．have been planted D．planted

Young girl            she is, she’s already considerate and thoughtful.

       A．a(chǎn)s                       B．a(chǎn)lthough              C．however              D．while