假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文,請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文,文中共有10處錯

誤,每句中最多有2處.錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加,刪除或修改.

  增加:在缺詞處加上一個漏字符號(︿),并在其下面寫上該加的詞.

  刪除:把多余的詞用斜線(\)劃掉.

  修改:在錯的詞下劃一橫線,并在該詞下面寫上修改后的詞.

  注意:1.每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞.

       2.只允許修改10處,多者(從第11處起)不算分.

Mrs. Black was having a lot of trouble with her skin, so she went to see her doctor and had some test. The next day her doctor telephoned her to give her the list of things she should not eat. Mrs. Black careful wrote all the things down a piece of paper, and then she left it beside the telephone when she went out to a friends meeting. When she got back home two hours late, she found her husband waiting for her. Carried a big basket full of food, she said, “Hello, dear. I've done all your shopping for you.” “Done all my shopping？” she asked in surprise, “but why did you know what I wanted？”“Well, when I got home, I found your shopping list beside the telephone，” answered her husband. “So I went down to the shop and bought everything you have written down.”

第二節(jié)讀寫任務(wù)(共1小題，滿分25分)
閱讀下面的短文，然后按照要求寫一篇150詞左右的英語短文。
A man came home from work late, tired and irritated, to find his 5-year old son waiting for him at the door.
“Daddy, may I ask you a question?”
“Yeah sure, what is it?” replied the man.
“Daddy, how much do you make an hour?”
“That’s none of your business. Why do you ask such a thing?” the man said angrily.
“I just want to know. Please tell me, how much do you make an hour?” pleaded the little boy.
“If you must know, I make $20 an hour.”
“Oh,” the little boy replied, with his head down. Looking up, he said, “Daddy, may I please borrow $10?”
The father was furious, “If the only reason you asked that is so you can borrow some money to buy a silly toy or some other nonsense, then you march yourself straight to your room and go to bed. Think about why you are being so selfish. I work hard every day for such childish behavior.”
The little boy quietly went to his room and shut the door. The man sat down and started to get even angrier about the little boy’s questions. How dare he ask such questions only to get some money? After about an hour or so, the man had calmed down, and started to think: Maybe there was something he really needed to buy with that $10 and he really didn’t ask for money very often.
The man went to the door of the little boy’s room and opened the door.
“Are you asleep, son?” He asked.
“No daddy, I’m awake,” replied the boy.
“I’ve been thinking, maybe I was too hard on you earlier,” said the man, “It’s been a long day and I took out my aggravation on you. Here’s the $10you asked for.”
The little boy sat straight up, smiling. “Oh, thank you daddy!” He yelled. Then, reaching under his pillow he pulled out some crumpled up bills. The man, seeing that the boy already had money, started to get angry again. The little boy slowly counted out his money, then looked up at his father.
“Why do you want more money if you already have some?” the father grumbled.
“Because I didn’t have enough, but now I do,” the little boy replied. “Daddy, I have $20 now. Can I buy an hour of your time? Please come home early tomorrow. I would like to have dinner with you.”
[寫作內(nèi)容]
1以約30詞概括上文的主要內(nèi)容。
2以約120詞對父母為工作而忽視孩子的現(xiàn)象進行議論，內(nèi)容包括：
(1)你對父母為工作而忽視孩子的現(xiàn)象的看法：
(2)你的父母(或其他親人)是如何是如何處理工作和關(guān)愛孩子的關(guān)系的；
(3)你認為父母怎樣才能更好地做到工作和關(guān)愛孩子兩不誤。
[寫作要求]
1作文中可以使用親身經(jīng)歷或虛構(gòu)的故事．也可以參照閱讀材料的內(nèi)容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子。
2作文中不能出現(xiàn)真實姓名和學校名稱。
[評分標準]
概括準確，語言規(guī)范，內(nèi)容合適，語篇連貫。

Miss Grey lived in a small house. She was old and did not like noise at all , so she was very pleased when her noisy neighbour moved out .A young man moved in and Miss Grey thought the man seemed to be quiet.

But at three o’clock the next morning , the noise of a dog woke her up . She thought she had never heard a dog there before . It must be the young man’s dog . So she telephoned the young man , said something bad about the dog and then hung up the telephone before he could answer. Nothing more happened until three o’clock the next morning . Then Miss Grey’s telephone rang , and when she answered , a voice said ,“ You telephoned me twenty four hours ago .Now I’ve rung you up to say that I have’t a dog . ”

根據(jù)短文內(nèi)容，判斷以下句子的正（T）誤(F)。（共5小題，每小題2分，滿分10）

1.Miss Grey felt sorry when her noisy neighbour moved out.

2.Miss Grey’s new neighbour was as the old one .

3.Some noise woke her up in the early morning .

4.She thought the new neighbour had brought a dog with him.

5.The young man rang up Miss Grey in the early morning , because he wanted to punish her.

Believe it or not, a rain check is not a weather report. A rain check is a small piece of paper. When can you get a rain check? Well, if you are going to a ball game or some other open-air activity and it is called off because of rain or some other reason, you may receive a rain check. With it you may go there again without paying.

You may also receive a rain check at a shop. As you know, sometimes when you go to a shop to buy something which is on sale, it is sold out. You may ask the assistant to give you a rain check and with it you can go again next time to buy what you need at the sale price.

Here’s another way to use this word. If someone invites you to go somewhere, you would like to go very much but cannot, you may say “May I have a rain check?” This means, “I will come next time.” But you can never say “May I take a rain check?” when your teacher gives you some homework.

根據(jù)短文內(nèi)容，判斷一下句子的正（T）誤（F）。

1.A rain check is a piece of paper with weather report on it.    (  )

2.When a ball game is called off because of rain, we can get a rain check.    (  )

3.We can buy something we need without paying with a rain check.    (  )

4.Sometimes a rain check means “I will come next time.”    (  )

5.Teachers will be glad to give their students a rain check when they ask them to do some homework.    (  )

第二節(jié)讀寫任務(wù)(共1小題，滿分25分)

閱讀下面的短文，然后按照要求寫一篇150詞左右的英語短文。

A man came home from work late, tired and irritated, to find his 5-year old son waiting for him at the door.

“Daddy, may I ask you a question?”

“Yeah sure, what is it?” replied the man.

“Daddy, how much do you make an hour?”

“That’s none of your business. Why do you ask such a thing?” the man said angrily.

“I just want to know. Please tell me, how much do you make an hour?” pleaded the little boy.

“If you must know, I make $20 an hour.”

“Oh,” the little boy replied, with his head down. Looking up, he said, “Daddy, may I please borrow $10?”

The father was furious, “If the only reason you asked that is so you can borrow some money to buy a silly toy or some other nonsense, then you march yourself straight to your room and go to bed. Think about why you are being so selfish. I work hard every day for such childish behavior.”

The little boy quietly went to his room and shut the door. The man sat down and started to get even angrier about the little boy’s questions. How dare he ask such questions only to get some money? After about an hour or so, the man had calmed down, and started to think: Maybe there was something he really needed to buy with that $10 and he really didn’t ask for money very often.

The man went to the door of the little boy’s room and opened the door.

“Are you asleep, son?” He asked.

“No daddy, I’m awake,” replied the boy.

“I’ve been thinking, maybe I was too hard on you earlier,” said the man, “It’s been a long day and I took out my aggravation on you. Here’s the $10you asked for.”

The little boy sat straight up, smiling. “Oh, thank you daddy!” He yelled. Then, reaching under his pillow he pulled out some crumpled up bills. The man, seeing that the boy already had money, started to get angry again. The little boy slowly counted out his money, then looked up at his father.

“Why do you want more money if you already have some?” the father grumbled.

“Because I didn’t have enough, but now I do,” the little boy replied. “Daddy, I have $20 now. Can I buy an hour of your time? Please come home early tomorrow. I would like to have dinner with you.”

[寫作內(nèi)容]

1以約30詞概括上文的主要內(nèi)容。

2以約120詞對父母為工作而忽視孩子的現(xiàn)象進行議論，內(nèi)容包括：

(1)你對父母為工作而忽視孩子的現(xiàn)象的看法：

(2)你的父母(或其他親人)是如何是如何處理工作和關(guān)愛孩子的關(guān)系的；

(3)你認為父母怎樣才能更好地做到工作和關(guān)愛孩子兩不誤。

[寫作要求]

1作文中可以使用親身經(jīng)歷或虛構(gòu)的故事．也可以參照閱讀材料的內(nèi)容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子。

2作文中不能出現(xiàn)真實姓名和學校名稱。

[評分標準]

概括準確，語言規(guī)范，內(nèi)容合適，語篇連貫。