英語課上,老師要求同桌同學相互修改作文。假設以下小作文為你同桌所寫，請你對其進行修改。文中共有10處錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個漏詞符號（^），并在此符號下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。

修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1．每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞。

2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。

3．必須按答題要求做題，否則不給分。

Dear Mr. Johnson,

I’ve learned from a newspaper that some clerks are wanting in your company. I am

eager to being one of them. So I am writing the letter. My name is zhang Hua. I was

born in the Hebei Province and I am in good health. I’ve just graduated in the Computer

Department of Wuhan University. I did very good in all subjects and I am especial good

at computer studies and English. I can read science books in English and doing some

writing in English as well. Beside, I know a little French. And in my spare time, I enjoy

playing basketball. As is said that your company is very famous and I’ll very glad if you

let me work for it. My telephone number is 027-89276628．I am looking forward to

hearing from you soon.

閱讀下面的短文，然后按照要求寫一篇150詞左右的英語短文。

： Liu Feng    Blog                      My 18^th Birthday      2010- 4-14 9:29:2

       Today is my 18th birthday, which means that from now on, I am an adult, so it is very fresh to me. I can not forget the happiness and love that my family and friends have given me. To show their love and affection, they held a great ceremony for me at home, and also sent me many kinds of presents, which have left me with great memories.

However, the most unforgettable thing is : a small gift from my English teacher, Jesse.

This morning, after class, Jesse approached me and said “Happy Birthday and here is a card for you”. After thanking him, I carefully opened it:

Dear Liu Feng,

       I sincerely hope the 18^th birthday will bring you great happiness all through your life. I have been with you for almost one year, and I find you are a good boy. You are working hard and doing fine in your study, and also I’d like you to have a little change in yourself. Since last month, when you failed in the exam, you have become shy and passive; you seem to have closed your world from others and hesitate to be together with them, which I think is not good for you. To adapt yourself to your future college and social life, find yourself an active life！

Yours,

Jesse”

Reading this, I was moved to tears…

       [寫作內容]

       以上是你的好友劉風在他的Blog里記錄他十八歲生日那天所發(fā)生的事, 現(xiàn)在請你依據(jù)他Blog里的內容發(fā)表你的看法：

       1．以約30個詞概括Blog的內容；

       2．以約120個詞發(fā)表你的看法，并包括如下要點：

   （1）簡要評價英語老師的做法；

   （2）依據(jù)英語老師指出劉風的不足之處，請你任選一點提出改進的建議；

   （3）說明其必要性；

   （4）表達你對他的希望。

       [寫作要求]

       1．作文中可使用自己的親身經歷或虛構的故事，也可以參照閱讀材料的內容但不得直接引用原文中的句子；

2．寫作內容中不能出現(xiàn)真實姓名和學校名稱。

讀寫任務（共1小題，滿分25分）

閱讀下面的短文，然后按照要求寫一篇150詞左右的英語短文。

[寫作內容]

以上是你的好友劉風在他的Blog里記錄他十八歲生日那天所發(fā)生的事, 現(xiàn)在請你依據(jù)他Blog里的內容發(fā)表你的看法：

1．以約30個詞概括Blog的內容；

2．以約120個詞發(fā)表你的的看法，并包括如下要點：

（1）簡要評價英語老師的做法；

（2）依據(jù)英語老師指出劉風的不足之處，請你任選一點提出改進的建議；

（3）說明其必要性；

（4）表達你對他的希望。

[寫作要求]

1．作文中可使用自己的親身經歷或虛構的故事，也可以參照閱讀材料的內容但不得直接引用原文中的句子；

2．寫作內容中不能出現(xiàn)真實姓名和學校名稱。

第二節(jié) 讀寫任務（共1小題，滿分25分）

閱讀下面的短文，然后按照要求寫一篇150詞左右的英語短文。

[寫作內容]

以上是你的好友劉風在他的Blog里記錄他十八歲生日那天所發(fā)生的事, 現(xiàn)在請你依據(jù)他Blog里的內容發(fā)表你的看法：

1．以約30個詞概括Blog的內容；

2．以約120個詞發(fā)表你的的看法，并包括如下要點：

（1）簡要評價英語老師的做法；

（2）依據(jù)英語老師指出劉風的不足之處，請你任選一點提出改進的建議；

（3）說明其必要性；

（4）表達你對他的希望。

[寫作要求]

1．作文中可使用自己的親身經歷或虛構的故事，也可以參照閱讀材料的內容但不得直接引用原文中的句子；

2．寫作內容中不能出現(xiàn)真實姓名和學校名稱。