Question

【題目】手機是現(xiàn)代人必備的通訊工具之一。它不僅可以用來打電話, 還可以用來做很多其他事情。例如: 聽歌、玩游戲、上網(wǎng)聊天、發(fā)郵件、看電影等。它一般是用塑料(plastic)和金屬(metal)制造的。

請根據(jù)以上提示寫一篇短文, 介紹一下手機,開頭已給出。詞數(shù)80個左右。

Mobile phones are becoming more and more important in our life._________________________________

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Answer 1

【答案】Mobile phones are becoming more and more important in our life. Nearly everyone has his or her own mobile phone except some children or very old people. They are not only used for making a phone, but also for doing many things, such as listening to music, playing computer games, chatting online, sending emails and watching movies. They are usually made of plastic and metal. I think mobile phones will be better and better and bring us more happiness.

【解析】試題分析：這是一篇材料作文，介紹了手機這種生活用品。結合所給材料，可知本文主要考查說明文的寫法和被動句的使用。注意一些常見句式的應用，比如：be used for…；be made of…;I think…等句式的應用。寫作中注意運用代詞，注意多種句式交替運用。還要注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關系，注意文后要表達自己的觀點和想法。

寫作亮點：本文結構緊湊，語言簡練。開頭介紹了手機在生活中越來越受歡迎，接下來介紹手機的廣泛用途和手機的制作材料，最后作者對于手機，發(fā)表了自己的觀點和看法。此處用了become more and more important, not only…but also, such as，listen to 等，這些詞組的運用也讓文章增色不少。