Question

【題目】書(shū)面表達(dá)。

現(xiàn)在的家長(zhǎng)對(duì)孩子們期望很高，希望他們能取得好成績(jī)，有一技之長(zhǎng)，甚至擅長(zhǎng)多個(gè)技能。只要孩子能一門(mén)心思學(xué)習(xí)，家里所有的大小雜事都與他們無(wú)關(guān)。雖然孩子們衣來(lái)伸手，飯來(lái)張口，但家長(zhǎng)們認(rèn)為孩子長(zhǎng)大了自然會(huì)做家務(wù)。作為中學(xué)生，你同意這種觀(guān)點(diǎn)嗎？為什么？

Answer 1

【答案】Now parents expect too much from their children.They hope their children can get good grades and be good at something.So they think there is no need for them to learn to do chores now.I disagree.

Firstly，I think as a member of the family，it's everyone's duty to do housework.Doing housework can help kids understand the idea of fairness.Secondly，it can develop children's independence.Now kids depend on their parents too much.They even never think about how to solve problems by themselves and can't look after themselves.Thirdly，both parents and children should be clear that it's not enough to just get good grades at school.Finally，doing chores is not difficult，so kids should do some chores at home.

In a word，doing chores at home is good for children.

【解析】這是一篇話(huà)題作文，就家長(zhǎng)是否應(yīng)該讓中學(xué)生做家務(wù)發(fā)表自己的觀(guān)點(diǎn)，我們要用恰當(dāng)?shù)恼Z(yǔ)言把所列舉的內(nèi)容準(zhǔn)確地表達(dá)出來(lái)，但不能逐句翻譯。寫(xiě)作中列舉現(xiàn)狀后要明確自己的觀(guān)點(diǎn)，然后列舉論據(jù)來(lái)支持自己的觀(guān)點(diǎn)，可發(fā)揮的地方較多。根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容可知本文主要是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，注意并列連詞的使用及主謂一致問(wèn)題。寫(xiě)作中注意上下文的過(guò)度，符合邏輯關(guān)系。