Question

【題目】作文 20分

據(jù)報道，中學(xué)生的身體素質(zhì)有所下降。這一情況已經(jīng)引起全社會的關(guān)注和教育部門的高度重視，這是某中學(xué)關(guān)于青少年體育鍛煉的宣傳標(biāo)語（slogan）：EXERCISE ONE HOUR A DAY KEEPS ILLNESS AWAY! 請你根據(jù)下面的要點和要求，用英語寫一篇80——100詞的短文。

要點：1．鍛煉身體的好處：strong，healthy, energetic，…

2. 鍛煉身體的方式：ball games，running，swimming．

3.請你談?wù)剬�學(xué)校開展體育鍛煉的看法或建議。

Answer 1

【答案】One possible version：

Health is very important to us teenagers. Either study or work is based on strong body. Doing sports every day helps us keep healthy and energetic. And taking exercise can keep us strong, we won't get tired or sick easily. Just as the slogan says, "Exercise one hour a day keeps the doctor away."

There are many kinds of sports we can do, such as running, swimming and ball games. Now we students have to do too much homework after school. I hope teachers will leave us less home work so that we can have more time to take part in sports. I also hope our school can organize more sport activities for us.

【解析】

試題這是一篇給材料作文，介紹鍛煉身體的好處，方式和建議。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，人稱為第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用，比如： Either study or work is…；There are …；We students have to…；I hope…；等句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意運用代詞，注意多種句式交替運用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系，注意使用合適的連詞，讓語篇連貫。

【亮點說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語言簡練。開頭介紹了健康的好處，有利于學(xué)習(xí)和工作，接下來介紹鍛煉身體的好處和方式，最后提出建議，要多找時間參加鍛煉。此處 either…or…; be based on;keep healthy; take part in等這些詞組的運用和動名詞短語taking exercise 做主語的運用也讓文章增色不少。