Question

如今，越來(lái)越多的中學(xué)生擁有并在使用手機(jī) (mobile phone)。針對(duì)這個(gè)問(wèn)題，不同的人有不同的觀點(diǎn)。許多學(xué)生認(rèn)為手機(jī)方便了自己與家長(zhǎng)和同學(xué)的聯(lián)系，發(fā)短信、打電話已成為中學(xué)生日常生活的重要組成部分。然而大多數(shù)老師和家長(zhǎng)認(rèn)為中學(xué)生上課時(shí)會(huì)用手機(jī)聽(tīng)音樂(lè)、玩游戲或與朋友發(fā)短信，將會(huì)嚴(yán)重影響學(xué)習(xí)，他們呼吁學(xué)校禁止學(xué)生攜帶手機(jī)來(lái)校。針對(duì)這一現(xiàn)象，寫(xiě)一篇100詞左右的短文，介紹上述兩種觀點(diǎn)并談?wù)勀愕目捶ā?br />(參考詞匯：have different opinions; communicate with; make up an important part of; urge …to do sth; stop …from…, in one’s opinion; concentrate on; be against; should be allowed to)

Answer 1

Nowadays mobile phones are more and more popular among middle school students and many of them have one in their pockets. Different people have different opinions about this issue. Some students think mobile phones make it much easier to communicate with their parents and classmates. Making telephone calls and sending messages make up an important part of their life. But some parents and teachers are afraid that some students may listen to music, play games and send messages with their mobile phones in class. They think it surely is bad for their study. They urge the school to stop students bringing mobile phones to school. In my opinion, as a student, our major task is to learn as much knowledge as we can at school. We should concentrate our time and energy on study. I am not against having a mobile phone, but I think students should not be allowed to use mobile phones in class.

試題分析: 這是一篇給材料作文。給出的材料比較全面，我們所要做的首先是應(yīng)用正確的英語(yǔ)句子把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來(lái)，在此基礎(chǔ)上亦可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，注意不要遺漏材料中給出的要點(diǎn)。寫(xiě)作前先結(jié)合要表達(dá)的事情確定句子的人稱時(shí)態(tài)，注意標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)及大小寫(xiě)等問(wèn)題，不要犯語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤。注意上下文之間的邏輯關(guān)系，語(yǔ)意連貫。
點(diǎn)評(píng)：注意寫(xiě)作中的時(shí)態(tài)、人稱和數(shù)的問(wèn)題，時(shí)態(tài)一般是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，人稱是第一人稱較多。寫(xiě)作中語(yǔ)言要準(zhǔn)確、簡(jiǎn)明，說(shuō)明有條理，符合邏輯。