Question

某英文報(bào)紙就家務(wù)勞動(dòng)（Housework）話題征文，請(qǐng)你投稿。
每個(gè)家庭都有許多家務(wù)，人人都應(yīng)該學(xué)做一些。談?wù)勀憬?jīng)常幫父母做哪些家務(wù)，有什么體會(huì)，并打算在暑假為家里做什么。
提示詞語(yǔ)：every family，lots of housework，learn to do，help，parents，be/feel proud of
                                                                             
                                                                             
                                                                             
                                                                             

Answer 1

Every family has lots of housework. Everyone should learn to do some of it. I often help my parents do housework such as washing clothes，cleaning the room and watering flowers.
I think I’ve learned how to take good care of myself and my family by doing housework. Sometimes cleaning all the windows is an enjoyable experience. I really feel proud of myself. And doing housework is also a kind of exercise.
The summer holiday is coming. I’m going to learn how to cook some dishes. My parents will be happy to enjoy them.

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【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】范文中運(yùn)用一些常見(jiàn)的短語(yǔ)help sb to do 幫助某人做某事；such as 比如；take good care of照顧某人； doing housework做家務(wù)；be proud of以，，為豪。 I often help my parents do housework such as washing clothes，cleaning the room and watering flowers.在這個(gè)句子中運(yùn)用such as ,washing,cleaning and watering是三個(gè)并列的動(dòng)詞，形式保持一致。Sometimes cleaning all the windows is an enjoyable experience.這個(gè)句子中動(dòng)名詞做主語(yǔ)。