Question

要點(diǎn)：1. .我家鄉(xiāng)過去是一個(gè)安靜的地方，四周青山環(huán)繞，空氣新鮮
2. 最近，我家鄉(xiāng)已經(jīng)發(fā)生了很大的變化。高樓大廈隨處可見。
3. 人們乘公交車去城市更快更容易。很多人買了私家車。
4. 但是，這些變化也給我們帶來了許多麻煩，例如 ：……
5. 我希望我的家鄉(xiāng)將來會(huì)變得越來越美麗。
注意：1.所寫短文必須包括以上內(nèi)容，自由發(fā)揮的內(nèi)容必須圍繞主題；
2.詞數(shù)80個(gè)左右，第四要點(diǎn)須用1-2句話作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮
The changes to my hometown          
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Answer 1

Last month I went to my hometown. It used to be a quiet small town. There were green hills around and there was fresh air. People went shopping by bike or on foot. It has changed a lot these years. There are many broad roads and tall buildings. Many people has bought cars and moved into the new flats. Many buses pass there. Many people go to the factory to work. The changes have brought many advantages, but they also cause lots of problems. The environment is not as good as before. The price of the house is too high, many people can't afford to buy the houses. I believe the government will take action to solve the problems. People will live a better life.

試題分析：本文要求以the changes to my hometown為題，根據(jù)所給要點(diǎn)并圍繞主題適當(dāng)發(fā)揮寫一篇英語作文，本題所給要點(diǎn)比較具體，在寫作前我們可先將這些要點(diǎn)翻譯為英語，再考慮使用適當(dāng)?shù)倪B接詞將其連接成文。一定要注意句意連貫，符合邏輯。
【亮點(diǎn)說明】本文語句表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確，并圍繞主題適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，所給要點(diǎn)無一遺漏。短文中用了一些短語和句式如：It used to be a quiet small town；The changes have brought many advantages；many people can't afford to buy the houses.等。