Question

【題目】書面表達

請根據(jù)下列提示寫一篇介紹你的朋友Lucy的短文。

1. 我有一個好朋友Lucy，她在第一中學(xué)學(xué)習(xí)。

2. 她住得離學(xué)校很遠,經(jīng)常乘公交車去上學(xué)。

3. 她喜歡做運動,也經(jīng)常吃水果和蔬菜,因為她想保持健康。

4. 她非常熱愛看書,她想更多地了解世界。

5. 她希望……（適當(dāng)發(fā)揮1—2句）

要求： 1. 詞數(shù)不少于70詞,內(nèi)容包括所有要點

2.適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，符合邏輯

3.條理清楚，語意連貫，書寫整潔。

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Answer 1

【答案】

One possible version：

I have a good friend. Her name is Lucy. She is in No.1 Middle School. She often go to school by bus, because her home is far away from the school. She likes doing sports, and she play tennis with me after school. She usually eats fruits and vegetables to keep fit. She enjoys reading books very much. Because she wants to learn more about the world. She hopes to travel around the world when she grows up.

【解析】這是一篇給材料作文，介紹我的朋友Lucy。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，人稱為單數(shù)第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用，比如：Her name is…，She is …，because her home is...， She hopes to...等句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意運用代詞，注意多種句式交替運用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系，完整地表達出提綱中所列內(nèi)容。本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語言簡練。開頭介紹了我的朋友的名字，上學(xué)情況，接下來介紹她的喜好：運動，飲食和讀書，最后介紹她的希望。此處go to school, far away from, like doing sth, keep fit, enjoy doing sth, want to do sth, learn more about, hope to do sth等這些詞組的運用也讓文章增色不少。