Question

書(shū)面表達(dá) （共l 題，計(jì) 15 分）
母愛(ài)情深，母愛(ài)無(wú)價(jià)；學(xué)會(huì)感恩，學(xué)會(huì)回報(bào)。某英語(yǔ)網(wǎng)站舉辦以“My mother”為題的英語(yǔ)征文活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下列思維導(dǎo)圖提供的信息，寫(xiě)一篇短文，介紹自己的母親和你們的真情故事。
提示:1.短文應(yīng)包括導(dǎo)圖中的全部信息，條理清楚，行文連貫，段落分明;
2.短文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名和地名。
3.詞數(shù)不少于80，開(kāi)頭已給出:不計(jì)人總詞數(shù)。

My mother
We need love. We also need to love. The person I love most is my mother. ___________

Answer 1

My mother
We need love. We also need to love. The person I love most is my mother. The person I love most is my mother. My mother is 41 years old. She is of medium height with long black hair. She is quiet. She is a history teacher in a middle school. She likes dancing. She can cook delicious food.
She did a lot for me when I was a child. She bought whatever I needed for my study, even though she didn’t have much money. She sent me from piano lessons to dancing lessons at the weekend. She cooked delicious and healthy food for me.
When I grow up, I will do what I can to make my mother happy. I will find a good job after I graduate from college. I’ll save money and buy beautiful clothes that make her look still young. I’ll take her to wonderful sights around China. Most importantly, I will stay with her when I have free time. That’s what she wants most, I think.

試題分析：這是一篇話(huà)題作文，要求介紹自己的母親和發(fā)生在母親與我之間的真實(shí)故事。動(dòng)筆前要認(rèn)真閱讀材料，不可遺漏要點(diǎn)，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。注意時(shí)態(tài)語(yǔ)時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)的搭配及主謂一致問(wèn)題。寫(xiě)作中適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語(yǔ)，為文章增色不少。如：even though“即使”；graduate from“從……畢業(yè)”；stay with sb“和某人待在一起”以及定語(yǔ)從句等一些復(fù)合句的使用。學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)，牢記一些固定句式及短語(yǔ)，寫(xiě)作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用，使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性，更富有條理。