Question

九年級(jí)學(xué)生面臨著升學(xué)的壓力,很多同學(xué)的學(xué)習(xí)狀況出現(xiàn)了一些問(wèn)題，在班會(huì)課上你和同學(xué)們分析了這些問(wèn)題和產(chǎn)生的原因，并提出了一些相應(yīng)的解決辦法。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下討論結(jié)果用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇小短文。

Problems	Reasons	Your solutions
壓力大 容易累 上課很難專(zhuān)心…	作業(yè)多 睡眠不夠 ...	1. 2. ...

注意：1.所寫(xiě)內(nèi)容必須包括表格中的內(nèi)容，并有自己的見(jiàn)解和發(fā)揮。2.詞數(shù)：80左右。
Hello, boys and girls,
We have had a discussion about the problems in our study. Most students       
                         
                                                                              
                                                                              
            

Answer 1

Senior high school entrance examination is coming. Many students are under too much pressure. We spend too much time learning,so we have less sleep and our memories decline.Because of homework and exams,we can't concentrate on studying.It leads us to be easy to be angry and have problems commucating with teachers and parents.Well, what should we do?If we give up,we won't get good grades.Therefore,we should try to make us feel relaxed.For example,when we feel unhappy,we can listen to some soft music or gentle music.It helps a lot.Also,we can go out for a walk and enjoy the fresh air.Do you think they are good ways? Have a try,and you'll feel relaxed.

試題分析：1，仔細(xì)審題。注意題目的具體要求，明確寫(xiě)作要求，確立文章要用的時(shí)態(tài)。本文應(yīng)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主。2，注意寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)，理出寫(xiě)作框架。本篇書(shū)面表達(dá)的要點(diǎn)已經(jīng)給出，應(yīng)注意將提示的內(nèi)容寫(xiě)完全，不要遺漏。3，連句成篇，注意語(yǔ)言的連貫和過(guò)渡。在寫(xiě)作中適當(dāng)使用連詞，會(huì)使文章過(guò)渡自然。最后還需檢查單詞拼寫(xiě)、標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)、大小寫(xiě)等細(xì)節(jié)問(wèn)題。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】文中使用了一些連接詞如so、because of、if、therefore、and等等，也使用了一些復(fù)合句和并列句，這些都為文章增色不少。