Question

近年來(lái)我國(guó)多地霧霾天氣不斷增多，嚴(yán)重地影響了人們的健康與生活。造成這一現(xiàn)象的主要原因是工廠排出的廢氣和汽車(chē)尾氣等。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下三個(gè)方面的提示，以“Let’s Do Something to Save Our Environment”為題寫(xiě)一篇80詞左右的短文。
【參考詞匯】   disaster  n. 災(zāi)難；smog  n. 霧霾
【寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)】1、重要性：只有一個(gè)地球。 2、主要問(wèn)題：污染、疾病、災(zāi)難。
3、措施：停止污染、保護(hù)大自然。
【寫(xiě)作注意】1、文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名、校名。 2、可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，以使行文連貫。
3、文章標(biāo)題和開(kāi)頭已給出，但不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
Let’s Do Something to Save Our Environment
In the last few years, the smog has occurred (出現(xiàn)) a lot of times, it has done great harm to our daily life. The serious disease caused by the smog and the environment are getting more worse.
                                                                        
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Answer 1

　　In the last few years, the smog has occurred (出現(xiàn)) a lot of times, it has done great harm to our daily life. The serious disease caused by the smog and the environment are getting more worse.
　　People have realized the earth is our home. We have only one earth. We must take care of it. If we harm it, it will cause a lot of problems in our earth, such as pollution, disaster and illness.
It’s our duty to keep our environment clean and tidy. We suggest people go to work or school with the public traffic and try our best to plant more trees. If we try our best to control the pollution , the earth will become much more beautiful.

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文，寫(xiě)一篇有關(guān)環(huán)保的作文。本文已經(jīng)給出了主要寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)，動(dòng)筆前要先認(rèn)真閱讀要點(diǎn)，然后圍繞要點(diǎn)適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。寫(xiě)作中，應(yīng)注意描述的全面性，盡量將提示的內(nèi)容利用上；結(jié)合材料內(nèi)容，可知本文主要是第一人稱(chēng)，一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)進(jìn)行敘述。語(yǔ)言的表述應(yīng)該符合語(yǔ)法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣。適當(dāng)使用連詞，做到上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語(yǔ)，為文章增色不少。如:a lot of許多；do harm to對(duì)……有害；take care of照顧，關(guān)心；It is adj to do sth做某事怎么樣；try one’s best to do sth盡力做某事等。學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié),牢記一些固定句式及短語(yǔ),寫(xiě)作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用, 讓文章更出彩。