Question

隨著地鐵的投入使用，乘坐地鐵出行已經(jīng)成為人們生活中必不可少的出行方式。請(qǐng)你就乘坐地鐵出行的利和弊，談?wù)撟约簩?duì)地鐵出行的看法和態(tài)度。

要點(diǎn)：1．根據(jù)表格提示，寫(xiě)一篇意思連貫、符合邏輯、100字左右的短文。
2．文章的開(kāi)頭與結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)人所完成的文章中。
3．請(qǐng)不要出現(xiàn)你的校名和姓名。
The underground train is playing amore and more important role in our daily life.
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When I go downtown, the underground train will be the first choice.

Answer 1

The underground train is playing amore and more important role in our daily life. People can take underground train to go to most places in the city. It’s very convenient. Taking the underground train is good for the environment and it helps save energy. What interests people most is that it’s very fast. You don’t need to worry about staying for long on the way.
However, it has some disadvantages. Usually there are too many people on the train and it’s really crowded. Because of it, something may be easily stolen. Sometimes people talk loudly and it’s very noisy. All these make people uncomfortable.
I think it is a good way to travel if we take the underground train. It’s much safer than the bus, and cheaper than the taxi.
When I go downtown, the underground train will be the first choice.

試題分析：本題要求學(xué)生根據(jù)要點(diǎn)提示寫(xiě)一篇意思連貫、符合邏輯、100字左右的短文。時(shí)態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主。體裁以議論文為主，可以發(fā)表自己的觀點(diǎn)。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】作者在寫(xiě)作中以通過(guò)與乘火車(chē)、乘公交車(chē)作比較來(lái)說(shuō)明乘坐地鐵出行的利和弊，條理清晰，段落分明。恰當(dāng)使用了一些復(fù)合句如What interests people most is that it’s very fast.、I think it is a good way to travel if we take the underground train.等等為文章增色不少。