Question

假設(shè)你是David, 請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下提示，介紹自己的學(xué)校。
提示：1）在陽(yáng)光中學(xué)上學(xué)，學(xué)校大，很漂亮；
2）有十八個(gè)教室，一個(gè)圖書(shū)館，兩個(gè)閱覽室，四個(gè)電腦房，操場(chǎng)在教室的前面，我經(jīng)常在那里打籃球；
3）最喜歡英語(yǔ)，它很有趣；有許多課外活動(dòng)，我參加了閱讀俱樂(lè)部；
4）老師們很友好，我們非常喜歡他們；
5）我家離學(xué)校遠(yuǎn)，每天騎自行車上學(xué)，到校大約花費(fèi)二十分鐘。
要求：1）表達(dá)清楚，語(yǔ)法正確，上下文連貫；
2）必須包括所有相關(guān)信息，并作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；
3）詞數(shù)：100詞左右（文章的開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)數(shù)）；
4）不得使用真實(shí)姓名和校名等。
Hello, everyone. I’m David. I’d like to talk about my school now.
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I love my school very much.

Answer 1

Hello, everyone. I’m David. I’d like to talk about my school now.
I study at Sunshine Middle School. It is a big and beautiful school. We have eighteen classrooms. We also have a library, two reading rooms and four computer rooms. Our playground is in front of the classrooms. I often play basketball there with my friends.
English is my favorite subject. It’s interesting. And we have many after-school activities. I am in the reading club now. Our teachers are all very kind. We like them very much.
I live far away from school. I go to school by bike every day. It takes me about twenty minutes to get to school. I love my school very much.

試題分析：這是一篇提綱類短文寫(xiě)作，所給材料比較豐富，我們要做的就是把這些材料翻譯成流利的英文。注意文章中的幾個(gè)關(guān)鍵點(diǎn)，對(duì)學(xué)校設(shè)施的介紹，包括說(shuō)清楚所在的位置，我最喜歡的科目，老師們都很友好，以及我如何上學(xué)等信息。通過(guò)分析可知，本篇短文主要用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，第一人稱。注意行文連貫，表達(dá)流暢。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】這篇短文總體表達(dá)很流暢，要點(diǎn)全。文章中用到了一些比較好的短語(yǔ)和句型，如in front of 、fter-school activities、far away from 、t takes me about twenty minutes to get to school等。這些句型和短語(yǔ)的使用令整篇文章完整，有條理。并且文章中沒(méi)有任何語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤，表達(dá)很準(zhǔn)確。